All Comments on 'A Loving Family: The Birthday Ch. 01'

" I love anal. So does your mom, by the way." She winked at me"

His SISTER says..

Surely that would be "our mum" or just "mum" (ignoring the UK/US differences).

Everything for a perfect hand job to do

What is this, creative writing 101? The story did what it was meant to do, give me, the reader, a hard cock. (Sorry, too many comas ?) Mission accomplished. Great story

THANK YOU..... YOU CREATED WHAT 99.9% POSTS ON THIS SITE...NEGLECT TO DO..RELATE A HOT..SEX-CHARGED STORY OF A FAMILY INTO TOTAL LOVING ACTION..INCLUDING TOTAL BI..SO MANY SIMILAR FAMILIES LIKE YOU DESCRIBE.. NEVER GET TO READ POSTS THAT TRULY THEY CAN IDENTIFY WITH..COMPLETELY..YOU DID SUCH AN EXCELLENT JOB OF TELLING THE TOTAL STORY..HOPEFULLY YOU WILL TELL US MORE..SO WE CAN REALLY KNOW THAT YOU UNDERSTAND...WHAT A SEX-CHARGED..HONEST STORY IS TO BE TOLD...AND IGNORE THOSE DUMB/BIGOTED CRITICS WHO SAY OTHERWISE..THANX

I am looking forward to next chapter your of to a verygood start pls keep it up yours loving leann XXXX

This is an amazing incest story in my opinion. I honestly will admit that I'm jealous...I wish I could be in that family. Anyways, I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Hope it comes soon though.

Keep it going. Very erotic story line made my cock nice n stiff.

This is the greatest story that I've ever read in my years of browsing the incest category on this site. How this has any less than a five star average is beyond me. Well written, to a professional extent. The story includes everything. But a 4.13 average? Unbelievable to me.

I envy this guy so much !

Trying to understand why you resubmitted

this after a nearly a year.

Was it editing or title change?

I'm sure I read this before, still a good story and would have been better without the Gay parts.

Maybe it's not this story, but the whole "on his/her 18th birthday, the main character is introduced to the family secret" is practically a cliche.

Once I started reading this, I recognized (recognised) it, and wondered why you wasted our time with the same story. Maybe you meant to submit Chapter 2? There was nothing changed in this from original submission (assuming you are the original author).

as soon as i saw the family had been fucking for years without him i quit reading.if you are going to fucking the people in your family then dont hide it from 1 member of your family that you are going to bringing into it anyway.to me that shows either you dont think the person will join or you just dont trust them.

Get Alyssa off birth control for the next chapter. Hot!! Five stars!!

No more gay!!!!!!!!

i loved it and can't wait for the second chapter. i love these stories esp bisexual ones. and you have written a very good hot story, makes one want to do the same.

I thought it was great and can't wait to read more. I think the bisexual part goes well with the whole family thing. More, more, more!!!

Hi some time gone since u post it. When is part 2?

a five star story - with chapter 2. otherwise - you left us hanging.........

I have to after with another person in that if you are planning on bringing another family member into your games then be honest about what you're doing. All of the lies and deception turn me off. And lets face it, if you are planning on bringing another family member in the incest why wait until 18?

Now I don't remember if the boy was a virgin or not, but there's no way in he'll be lasted thru hand job and blow jobs. Fucking mom, then sister and taking it in the ass with no real warm up. Father and son cumming just once all night?

I see why you passed on the second chapter.

Eh. Could have been better without all the vulgar language. . . .