All Comments on 'A Mage Born Ch. 03 - Epilogue'

Somehow I voted this story 1 star. That was an error, but it nonetheless it remains.

I have enjoyed reading all three chapters of this story, and would have scored this chapter 5 stars, as it easily merits that score.

I love this whole series. I prefer the longer, richer chapters, but I enjoy the bite-sized versions like Vale's story as well. Thank you.

I wanted to give you six stars, but then I remembered this: " I know that the events of recent days has weighed upon you, but as I see it, ..."

The subject and predicate's numbers are mismatched. Events _have_ weighed ... . Plural subjects require a plural verb.

Thus only a five star grade.

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Excellent writing and character development... I was disappointed to see Vale’s “inner slut” come out, though. While effective for getting closer to her target, she really wasn’t in control of herself. Being a Size Queen could end up being a chink in her armor. Overall, though, very well done. 5*