All Comments on 'A Maid's Duties'

Grammar was so bad it ruined a decent story idea

I think that must be a very very very very old saying from some where and showing the writers age. Who the heck says that????

Okay, who are you and where did Ashson go?

This was terrible.

how do you manage to spit out material like a pop start spins a new single every month? How do you do this?

I just think of ridiculous situations and then try to make them realistic. This one was inspired by a Playboy cartoon where the wife was telling the husband that the maid was there to make her life easier. Not his. The husband and maid were in bed at the time.

Over all very poorly written. Spell check and grammar check should have been utilized and the editor option would have been helpful. Your transitions also need work.

Love your stories ashson! My kind of non consent.. no humiliation or dom/sub stuff

Loved your short story but as usual the derogatory remarks are always from 'Anonymous' they should either grow a pair or go back to crayoning in.

If you don't like Ashson's stories, then don't read them. Just stop whining already. It's only a little bit of light fun.

I Wish you would continue this!

It is a funny little jewel among the stories that tend to be presented on this site.

A surprising twitch at the end! Well done.

Live in Lima, Peru. Yes, we have a maid. Occasionally, yes, I hump the maid. So this story does exist in fact. I gave this one a 5, althoigh I admit it could have been better edited. The 5 stars were because the story seemed so.......familiar.

Great story.

No grammar or spelling errors that I could see. Don’t know what that other reader was criticising but it wasn’t this story.

Brilliant! Good joke. Well written, good build-up. Excellent. Thanks.