All Comments on 'A Mail Order Bride Ch. 01'

... very elaborate scenario and character introduction ... might benefit from adding a few pinches of fun and soul

Very good story. I find myself wanting to read the next chapter to find out what happens next. I would have liked for there to have been more detail of the physical attributes of Jonas and Katie. Also, the sex scenes should have been described in more detail.

perfect and legal and romantic noncon

i cant make myself hate jonas even though he forced her and was brutal during her first time

sooner or later she might accept his love and lust for her

5stars

beautiful marital noncon very simple,real and natural

why are you underrated whats wrong with others?

Why underrated? I haven’t a clue, but glad you enjoyed reading this story, it’s one of my favorites.

POV changes in a long story are annoying, but when it happens as often as it does in this opening chapter, instead of the far more readable 3rd person writing, I just can't hang around for the rest of the series.