by KillerRomance
This is a great story that you have here... With more added chapters I am very sure that you'll get the votes as well as win something lol.
Even if this is your first time in this genre you still did a fantastic job with it. And I can't wait for the next chapers.
... that this doesn't evolve into a generic slavery/rape/BDSM thing. There's too many of those, anyway.
Looking forward to the next chapter. I been checking every day for it. Please Hurry.
But, it is too late, must go to bed. Thank you so far. Excellent so far. Will come back for more when next there is time to read.
Lillian, your stories are always so amazing, thank you so much for this! I have been so busy with my own story that I just now got to this one, but I sure as hell am happy to read it! I love these kind of conquer stories where the initial feelings is hatred/anger/meaness/lust and where more feelings and tenderness build up (which I know they are). I can't wait to read more!
And thank you for all the AMAZING feedback you have sent me (and especially for taking up for me!). It means more to me than I can express. In short-- you are the shit. :)
Excitedly venturing to read more,
CrueltobeKind
An engaging beginning, it will be interesting to read of the places you will take the reader. The people your characters interact with, the push and pull of life you endow in your protagonists