All Comments on 'A Matter of Betrayal Ch. 06'

he got to much power even in fanasy world.

I agree with the previous comment. He does have a too much power for his age and position. Also I feel that you're focusing a little too much on Seth. Fuck him I say and his little bitch too. Why not wrap this up and show us what happens a few years later?

Seth has to go! Colin should bring him down and down hard. Seth's harassment of the others will back fire on him and it will be the beginning of the end for him. Colin and his mother will triumph in the end and Seth's father, Patrick, will see the evil he created in his son.

this story grabs hold of you like a good mystery. good vs. evil. you know bad stuff is going on but the good guys can't do anything about and it rilles you up. it's a love/mystery story that gives me this tingly feeling in the back of my neck that something bad, REALLY BAD, could or is going to happen. OOOOOOHHHHHH i can't wait.

For the characters, welcome to the real world. For the reader, welcome to the world of erotic literature.