All Comments on 'A Matter of Timing'

the story lacks the tension and focus to keeps the reader reading.

No boredom here.It's hard to know what the others were looking for . Great idea ,well executed. Ignore the unfounded criticism. Love the characters good job of connecting their ideas/feelings with actions.Keep exploring these people.

Who are these critics? And what are they looking for? Retards. This is a great story!

I disagree with the negative comments... it does lack some tension but there is some interesting potentiality like the dominance/submission balance... yet the implication to the father/husband relationship deserve more exploration.

and well written- Thank you, author.

In reading this story I find that the lack of dialogue between mother and son is a drawback to the completeness of this tome. It also spends too much time on recounting past affairs which do not seem to be germaine to the incestuous relationship that is going to take place and certainly can't be the build up which was missing altogether. No explanation as to why the mother would succumb to incest as there is no mention of sexual inadequacies on the part of the father. The conceptualization of this story needs to be explained during the story and I didn't see that. Still the gratest drawback in my estimation was the total lack of dialogue between the two main characters.

interesting interactions with these two-hot sex-nicely written thanks

great writing had wood most of the time cant figure why mom and son cant talk about relationship that took place between them im sure mom could tell junior how she wants to be treated by him when to be gentile and when to be a rode hard cant wait for another part to the story keep up the good work

Agreed - a fantastic storyScrew the critics AND mom again!

This story was way to long and drawn out. A build up is great but enough is enough. I waited for 4 pages and everything but what these story

Ies are about. I just couldn't go on.

Thoroughly enjoyed the psychological twists and turns of this story. That is what makes it unique. Character development was fairly good. I like indepth development. I do not care about character's measurements. As far as the sex goes, it was good; especially since I enjoy Dom/sub relationships. however, readers need to remember that 90% of sex is mental.