by bbw4youngercocks1
I can see you have made a lot of improvements to some of the things I was finding fault with in the older stories. I love seeing that kind of growth in a writer.
It's one of the things I'm struggling with right now myself. I'm still doing baby step improvements, with each story.
Two steps forward, one step back. Hey great i'm Cha-Chaing.
Very good story. Nice and well written. Loved it.
M.S.Tarot
IWISH I HAD THE BALLS TO MAKE A SECRET BABY THAT OS A FANTASY TO WATCH ANOTHER PARENT A CHILD A FATHERED AND IT IS OUR SECRET I PERFER IT TO BE WITH A POWER COUPLE
Could you make a secound story where the father finds out about the son and they continue there relationship?
I liked the story I liked the pregnant at the please write where get tighter and have more childen
WOW- This is the BEST story I have ever read on this site
You are a FANTASTIC writer
Plssssssssssssskeep up your work, I for one- LOVE IT
CB