by CousinObsessed
Don't normally read the incest stories but your tag line caught my eye. A well written, sexy story. Thanks for sharing
Take your time, this is progressing well. Can't wait for the next installment.
Please use an editor to check word usage. I'm goofy about that. Cost you a star. Otherwise a fun story.
I love the long, slow buildup. It's really sensational and erotic.
If you work with an editor to cleanup some of the writing, this would be a bit better. But, to me, it's the story that matters most, and you've done a great job!