All Comments on 'A Mole in the House Ch. 03'

Great story. You left it on a real cliffhanger. Can't wait to see what happens next!

Brilliant plot. Damn. I salute you! That was some pretty good writing. Jesus. Man, if it all is one big set up, then Lawrence is one of the most devious bastards I've ever read. Either that or he's the most heartless. If it wasn't his idea and he was just following orders from the old man, then you'd have to be stone cold to carry them out. Can't wait for more :)

Thanks for a very realistic tale. You've been so adroit in your character development that I could feel the intense attraction between the two primary characters and then the rawness at the end when those feelings were being questioned! THANKS....and PLEASE don't leave us hanging for long!