by silkstockingslover
Do I want to read more about Mason's incestuous affair with his gorgeous mother Lily? Do I want a continuation of one of the hottest - and best-written -incest stories ever? That's the silliest question I've been asked for ages.....
There has to be more of this great story line afterall its only day 5 of the cruise. Noticed no mention of her being on the pill after 18 years of celibacy so morning after pill would be great. Afterall only Mason could impregnate her as he would be leaving her alone??
Of course we want more of this story. But we would also like more of your other stories where you asked that question and left us hanging despite many yes answers. I think someone on one of your last few stories mentioned that. You write this great stories, but they are clearly in need of more additions, and you leave us in mid stroke with blue balls. Or the female equivalent. So please give us more.
It was a hot story which needs to continue as there many more miles to travel before they arrive at home port.
Can't wait for the next episode. Back at the resort or when they cum home. Does Lily want to fill in all the years that she missed. Will Mason become her dominant. Can't wait.
Please continue after they get home with lots of suntan hose teasing and play!
Maybe do a recap on the water taxi before they get off where they trade numbers and email while agreeing to stay in touch. This way you can branch off to different stories where they go to visit or come to visit the other person for others. Or maybe even have one of them become pregnant and since all 4 guys had cum in her, she does not know who the father might be. You also commented where 2 of the other said she wanted to do her brother, and the other said so do I where it happens by surprise or maybe all 4 of them do the brother at a house party.
You worked your fucking magic on my erect penis again, SSL!!!!! Three ejaculations happened because of my reading this masterpiece of sexual seriousness!
Fuck!!! Your stuff ALWAYS does that to my tired old cock - I can always feel twenty years younger reading your fuck tales. Yo really must be the best fuck on earth to write about it so authoritatively and I have to really envy YOUR fuck partner. Give him (or her) my best - and fuck on - but keep telling us about it!!!!!!
This tale has been one of the best I have read and any future story/s will definitely be more than welcomed by me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Would you consider getting together with your artist and do us an illustrated sequel to this story The shemale story you did was to my great surprise a tremendous turn on for me!
SSL, you are one of my favorite authors on this site. And, in my opinion, this story is in desperate need of 3 or 4 more chapters. Just sayin'.
The saga of 18 year old Mason and his mother Lily is an instant masterpiece. Like lots of boys, Mason finds that his own mother gets him so hard his young cock is practically busting out of his pants. Lily is drawn to her kid's fine fat penis and worships it with her mouth as only a mother can. Mason blows his young balls in Lily's mouth, but the main even is still to come and at his age the boy's got plenty more of that glorious stuff for his mommy. There's messing around with a bunch of others, but in the end the loving incestuous couple know the simple truth. That hairy hole between Lily's thighs, the hole Mason came out of 18 years before, is for her darling baby boy alone. And baby boy's big hard cock plus every drop of semen in his heavy hanging balls is just for his mommy. I'd vote 20 stars if I could. Please, dear SSL, more about Mason's adventures up the warm wet mommy-hole he was born from.
I want to read more of this. Would be cool to see the son jealous.
Yes, you must continue with this pair. She is a mommy-slut now so let her be one. Indulge his fetish with stocking and heels and so much more.
Superb writing as always SSL. ๐
I think this is one of your best, you never stray from the emotional aspect. Your writing is fantastical there remains a believability to it.
You absolutely need to continue you this... from the time they get back to the ship, any other sailing adventures and onward....
The continual climaxing left me worn out (limp?). There needs to be some multi-racial sex once they get back to the ship. Maybe a massage, too? Nude beach sex means lots of lotion motion, and it eases the anal action. The only opening left to really use is their ears. A gorilla, bull, stallion, and a ready mare should be in the next episode. All that's left is a bi-sexual fucking machine, a must for every sensuous cruise, perhaps in a village, across the road from the fragrant and tasty bakery-bar. All that wild, wonderful sex has messed with my mind, penis, and anus!...
This was great. I would love to know what happens when they get back to the ship!
You can't leave these two characters on the beach like that! We need to know what happened when they got back to the boat for the rest of their cruise.
Were the other couples involved on the ship as well, or will they meet new partners?
Please continue this story with these two great new characters from your wonderful imagination.
It was Hot and I enjoy there attitudes!!! More more more!
We obviously want loads more these two, they didn't even fuck dick to pussy yet so you own us a great fuck mister! Even for your high standard of sexualised stories this one stands apart by sheer quantity of sexual energy as well as emotions and withheld pent up desires, too bad such stories aren't more frequent around here. I'm always impressed by your character development and internal struggle that you mange to squeeze in so easily, it takes great skill and you do it each time with bravado!
5* and nothing else but hopes for more!
A great story as always. There are 9 more days for the cruise. Then the rest of the summer before Mason goes away to college. There are Lily's visits to see Mason at school. Lily could meet Mason in the football team's locker room and the team could come in and catch them before joining in. Endless possibilities.
As a stocking fetishist, You are my all time favorite author. I definitely want no need to read more of these two. If you could add some stocking leg play as well as toe and foot things would be perfect. Thank you in advance.
Joel
She was essentially a virgin when getting pregnant and then was celibate for 18 years and then pops in an orgy? Background stories need to be a little bit plausible.
more please i want more. want to know what happens next.
To paraphrase Billy Idol, "With a Rebel Yell, I cried, More, More More. More, More, More".
My dear, your story telling is superb and you had me in the palm of your hand from the onset . I want to be that son. I have a feeling that you are going to be my favorite author soon, as I cannot make up my mind on which of your vast collection to read next. I am sure my wife will get wet if not soak her panties when I share my find with her. Please never stop writing and do tell us when your next story will come out.
Slimdick and Bella
Would definitely like them to meet up again with the 3 couples and possibly have an orgy on the ship. If possible it would be wonderful to have this story illustrated as well.
I give very few 5-star ratings. This is one. Please carry on this story.
dont normally go for your stories - nylon fetish - but this is a dam good story - if you illustrate please use real people & not drawings 5 stars
I need to see where this story goes from here! Don't leave me hanging!
I love your writing and this story, you must continue if you love these characters he has a stocking Fetish so that has to be written about. I would love to see the Orgy continue on board the ship. But know Lilly has found out see loves to eat pussy and Masons girlfriend what's to fuck her you have to write about that as well. So keep going please.
But I find all your stories that way! Yes I want to read about their first night alone and how they consummate their new relationship dynamic. I would love for her to decide to move away with him to college and start over as husband and wife, having their own family. Lily deserves to be happy. Your stories make me wish the star scale went beyond 5. Be well, waiting for next installment.
Very hot story and very well written! Keep us up with your good work!๐
Please tell us about when they do actually fuck each other. Especially when she is wearing the nylons.
Have Mason fuck Mom back at the ship (for the rest of the cruise) before deciding to move and live as husband and wife.
let mom have regrets of the incest let her fuck one of masons friends a black one with 11 inch hard dick let mason catch them so he will be heartbroken
story was fine until the others knew they were mom & son big turn of that they were okay with it
They have not consummated their new relationship until they have actual intercourse.
This also needed a little more proofreading and editing.
I want to know about their first private exlporation of this new relationship.
I'm sure somwhere on that ship there is a pair of silk stockings.
On another note,
Please look up Tom Allison, The King of 70s and 80s incest writing. You are gifted.
I'm sure it would make you even better.
Great story & I do enjoy the characters also. Now let them explore each other more in depth before they move on to other adventures.
Would love a story from Lilly's PoV as well as a story about when he finally fucks her sweet cunt.
The best in a long time and hopefully more. Looking forward to more groups and lesbian sharing, with toys. Mom should join the modeling job. Grate loving and giving story.
Hope you continue to develop Lily and Mason's story. Looking forward to their future exploits.
I and the public would like more of your story. Maybe the next story could concentrate on Mason and Lilly having sex with just the two of them. Would love to hear about Lilly's and Mason's exploits when she takes him to college or goes to visit him once he is in college.
Thoroughly enjoyed your very sexy and well written story. Please continue with these two characters in further sex adventures. It would be interesting to hear what happened upon return to the ship and any more "friends" they might meet on the cruise home. Maybe they could meet up with the young couples again or bump into them at University when Mum visits. The possibilities are endless
Love your work keep it going !
Would like to read something better. Quality has been dropping for quite a while.
I would have gone blind decades ago if I had access to your sexy stories!!!
I can't really offer any advice on what should happen next because you're the artist*, but I would really like to read more about these two.
*(Although I did like the exhibitionist/group sex aspects.)
This one of those stories that begs to be continued. Loved it from beginning to the end.
Putting things, like e.g. dicks, into somebody's mouth after having been in an ass (without protection or thoroug cleaning) is so unhealthy and risky that it is an immediate turn-off.
(Humiliation or not - difficult to bellieve a woman can find that act any attractive and connected to lust.)
Having been a fan for years , this is one of your best . As far as making a series out of it you have all the markings for a great one. I like your incest/taboo a lot , and a few of the others as well.
But if you need any more prodding other than to look at the number of comments in less than 4 days (70 so far ) then I think that is your answer .
Really enjoyed the trip through this story and am looking forward for more of it .
By the way I read a lot of stories on Literotica and give a few 5's this on got a 5 .
Thanks for the great read
tx cracker
You have more stories 1. When they get back on the ship 2. When they get back home.
This was the first of your stories I have read, but it will not be the last. Excellent background and build up , and once the sex started it got hotter and hotter. Great story !
The orgy shit just spoilt the story it is supposed to be a mom and son shit they did not fuck at all
yes, yes , yes do more for mason & lily. I think you lit a pilot light for a sweet range of stories. well developed, good background. lily just got a start to remembering what so many of us forgot.......the passion of sex and relationships. Yes we fantasize about things but we're unsure about jumping into what we have......HMMMMM GP
Yes please more. There's so much potential. Not only with what can happen at home now, but there's still a few days left of the cruise that I'm assuming the other 3 couples are passengers on.
wow what a great beginning to a beautiful series , definitely would love to read more
Great erotic story and setup to potentially a hot incest nylon fetish event or event! Now that the deed is done and with no need to turn back now. Lilly can use her seductive maturity knowing that Mason has such an admitted huge nylon fetish and she loves his beautiful big young cock to seduce tease and make her new stud want to give her that cock often! She can go from a daily long time wearer of what she thought was just another part of her wardrobe to her perfect super tool to bring them both intense pleasure! She can be amazed at her new liking to how sexy sheer silky shiny nylons can be for not only her stud but even her!! Would love to hear it inspires her to dress more and more sexy and slutty for Mason and they find they both love it! Can't wait and Bravo!
Kisses
Jamie
Niteflirt com/Jamiebitv
Here's the link to the original source thread:
http://forum.literotica.com/showthread.php?t=1218663
The only criticism I could think of is that her minister father would never tell his daughter to have an abortion. He would have made her give it up for adoption.
Combine these two lines together. That should fix it.
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showthread.php?t=1218663
Awesome story, thanks for writing. We need a part 2 since one deed was left out.
more is to this story is definitely needed, as only you can do, Jasmine. I've been reading you're stories for a long time.
This was a excellent read, and thanks for writing. I think the story would have been better had there been a little less sex and more fictional plot. Getting into Lily's head a little more with the narration would have been nice. I'd love to read more from these characters, but the pace should be slower and better developed, not just a bunch of non-stop sex scenes.
I know these are all fantasy unless claimd otherwise, but all I could think about was that an 18 yo ass fucking his mom on the beach without any lube -- don't they know that sand gets into EVERYTHING? Bet they found out. Sex on a beach is a marvelous thought - not the greatest in reality. Still, this was HOT!!!
Please let them continue their adventure. You're my favorite author on here. I read your stories religiously. I would love to see the aftermath of this story
Definitely think this one should continue. May be they all get back find out they're all on the same cruise. There could be further group escapades on the ship or at the next port they pull into.
Yup very interesting story. I like how you made the group support them
Good story but very unrealistic. I personally enjoy the mother-son stories that are at least halfway believable.
I hope you continue this story for many more chapters .... even with them staying in touch with a few of the others from the orgy
Loved the story, must continue as they get home. Involve a girlfriend of Mason and one of his friends. Can't wait to see more.
this is one of our favorite erotic web sites and you are by far our favorite author. We love role playing and incest is one of our favorites. Although we've never considered it in reality....I love coming home to my little girl playing with herself wearing nothing but her silk stockings.....keep up the great work!
I would at least like to see what happens back on the cruise for the last few days, and possibly back home. Thanks in advance.
Please continue. Good read, they make a great couple being so near in age.