All Comments on 'A Moment'

I like your style...

It took you nearly a year to come up with this ? ?

It is amazing how easy it is to demonstrate that our overall evaluations are terribly defective. This was a beautiful moment.

This story is incomplete. It seems to beg for more to follow...like maybe they meet again etc...need to follow up; on it...

S, i wanted to say that you made me laugh out loud for several minutes. And i am still chuckling ruefully at this clever tidbit.

Been there, done that, got the food stained t-shirt to prove it. I can remember similar situations when my wife would cover my strutting ego with the syrup of her compliments of how handsome and manly i am.

Then proceed to smoothly slide in her blade of reality.

Why were all the beautiful women eyeballing me with lustful leers?

"Your fly is open."

"You got your t-shirt on inside out."

"There's a big wet spot running down your leg from your crotch."

"You got mustard all over your beard."

You know. Moments like that do happen. Very rarely to me. I think I can count on one hand how many. But they do make me feel good. Thanks

I wonder if it will ever happen to me? Oh well I guess I just keep my eyes peeled...

Another very good tale. 5 star short story. I’m really liking this author.

Bill S.

Serendipitous outing. Speculative but simply a nice day.

(The what if, is the tease of the imagination...)

A pleasant experience with your wife, but to obsess is possibly a self delusion, if not a narcissistic ego.

The wife will pop that with a remark or ignore it.