All Comments on 'A Morning on Island Pond'

by WRJames

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PrincessErinPrincessErinalmost 15 years ago
Wonderful

A very well written story that was intriguing and made me want to continue reading. Good luck in the contest.

taxpapabobtaxpapabobalmost 15 years ago
Kinky, Perverse Swimmers

This story is pretty well written and pretty hot -- but too kinky for me. Instead of emotional, satisfying sex, what we get is just fuck parts bumping willy nilly against each other.

abc101abc101almost 13 years ago
It was an ok story

It was an ok story, i wish there was more suspense before the sex acts began. But it this was a great scenario and opening. However, it kinda came to a fast end.

Overall it was good. Keep up the good work

pastaman47pastaman47over 5 years ago
Great Story

When I was a kid we had a small pond back in the woods and would often swim naked. This is where I saw the neighbor lady skinny dipping. I tried to leave before she saw me but soon heard her calling to me to join her. The rest is history.

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