All Comments on 'A Most Unusual Winter Break'

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oldnornryoldnornryover 10 years ago
Hot!

I really enjoyed the "mystery guest" in the night. We look forward to the next chapter. However, the mystery is out of the bag. How about the next swinger's party with everyone blindfolded?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Sequel needed

That story reads like an opening to a very erotic series of stories. Please write more.

Romantic1Romantic1over 10 years ago
Agree, sequel to finish the winter break is in order

Please write fast before we forget the characters. Love the story. 5*

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
MORE!

I heartily concur, this calls for at least two more chapters if you can keep up this quality. It's time to teach them how to 'dance'.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
ALL THE COMBO'S ARE CONNECTED

I really thought this was a good piece of fiction. There are some pairings to move along with but give us story not just a bland continuation of the night.

Put some hair on one of these women. Maybe Natalie's mom?

goducks111goducks111over 4 years ago
very sexy story

5 stars

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