by chateneau
I really enjoyed the "mystery guest" in the night. We look forward to the next chapter. However, the mystery is out of the bag. How about the next swinger's party with everyone blindfolded?
That story reads like an opening to a very erotic series of stories. Please write more.
Please write fast before we forget the characters. Love the story. 5*
I heartily concur, this calls for at least two more chapters if you can keep up this quality. It's time to teach them how to 'dance'.
I really thought this was a good piece of fiction. There are some pairings to move along with but give us story not just a bland continuation of the night.
Put some hair on one of these women. Maybe Natalie's mom?