All Comments on 'A Mother & Son Matchmaker'

There were far too many question marks at the ends of statements and it distracted me and confused me. There was also a "your" instead of a "you're" and there were quotes sometimes in the wrong places.

The story idea is good, but a bit misleading since the boy doesn't have sex with his mother in the end. I'm not sure the sexual dialogue sounds right, either. And who says "Sugar" these days?

But the story needs a bit of editing to remove the errors.

Perhaps the author could continue with another chapter about him fucking his mother.

Thanks for the story

Good story line and lends itself to several more chapters.

If the English and grammar in your story are anything to go by, youve been having too much rum in your tea. Get yourself an editor.

cant anyone just read the stories for what they are and not pick them apart for grammer mistakes . not everyone is an english pro .

it's a story I myself loved it and since nobody paid to get here and the writer isn't getting paid to tell a tale, what's the big deal if punctuation is off. If you don't have anything nice to say, say nothing. If you don't like the stories quit coming to the site all it will do is infuriate you, read the news it's better than porn the whole planet is taking it in th chute. Sweeet Tap Dancing Christ enjoy the read and wish you had the nads to even submit something, just my two cents worth

hope my grammer bothers those critics to no end

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I liked it alot. Nuff said.

i want to hear the rest of the story

Please continue the story....It is great.

...it was submitted in the wrong genre. No actual incest occurs in the story, even though it is "talked about" by all of the characters. If the author has intentions of continuing the tale, and bringing mother and son together in bed, it's left unstated.

As such, it came across as rather bland, all things considered.

I think mom's going to get lucky. It will be interesting to see how he will juggle his schedule to service two ladies.

I love the idea of two women in their twilight years plotting to share a younger man. The author has made his characters perfectly credible and has left his readers eager for the next chapter, including me!

loved reading this story,,,can`t wait for the next

I hope that he can make love to his mother in the next chapter.

Thanks for the read

This is a good horny story, but the entire yarn is liberally laced with misspellings. In the last part, Marie becomes Margaret, and I dont understand these spelling issues if the proofreader does the job properly.

Keep writing though, because it's good and rude. The boy is one lucky bastard as well

But Josh is a natural-born motherfucker, and when he gets that big stiff prick of his up his mother's mommy-hole--look out momma!

Within a week Josh will have another 58 year old, his mother, to bang and bring her joy a a young, virile cock. Both mother's of course can wear his dick to off his groin area. Ooooohh, the stamina of "the Grey Corp" and the young bucks that are willing to service.

You have a serious problem keeping names straight,, this one has Marie and Margaret fucking at the same time,, the hitchhiking story ,, Carla had at least 3 different aliases,,, Carla, Carlos, clara,,,, will give you an ace for your effort

there are a few issues with grammar, spelling and the story doesn't flow sometimes but... oh the subject is very arousing. a solid 4*

Should have had the mother enter while the son was referring to the neighbor as mother. A number of scenarios could have then been added to enhance the story. You need a proof reader. There are a number of errors that should not be in the story, including one where you used "error" when you should have used "erred". A proof reader, with a background in English grammar or well written stories would help eliminate most of these errors.

Good story. I love when my lover is vocal... telling me how much she likes what is happening, what she wants...

I hate a boring silent lover.

On to part 2, thanks for sharing.

Who the hell is Margaret?

real nice .

I have given it 5 stars but you should read through before posting to avoid silly little mistakes. Like the story though

Although short, the introduction into this series was well constructed, logically developed, and accurately reflected the sexual needs of older people. What was especially pleasing was the fact that Marie was not jealous nor emotional hurt when Josh was thinking of his mother and addressed her as mother. 5 star chapter.