by Rob_mDear
Great great story. I wanted one of them to break the rules, either one of them. It ended better that they didn't. Will there be more?
Another good story from this talented author. Keep up the good work!!!
Wow - I don't know who has the better control over their emotions - the characters or the writer! A beautifully written story that keeps you aroused and on the edge of your seat wondering 'will they or won't they? and even with the show of restraint mother and son still make love! This was more than a good story, it was a piece of art. Im torn between hoping for a sequel and hoping you keep this story as it is, perfect in every way!
A great well written story. As I read your story,I kept my hopes, that they would actually get to consummate their sexual love affair,but it was not to be.Could the author continue with another chapter, and let the mother and son come together,in the loving and sexual adventure,that would be a lasting man/woman love affair? The characters almost came alive right in front of my eyes as I read the story.Thanks for the good post......Rich
Extremely well written. The author, like others have mentioned, keeps a tight rein on his characters and his words. That control creates a taut emotional struggle between mother, son, and the reader. Few stories make me wet, but this one took me to the edge. Sophie
Sensual, as in feeling sensations, this is what this story provided. Good imagining. Well done.