All Comments on 'A Naughty Little Moment'

The use of whatever excuse you want to use for the lack of spelling and grammar in the "text" messages detracts from what could be a half-way decent story.

Loved it! The text messaging was original and done well with the abbreviations and such that people normally use. If you haven't already written the next part, maybe you could have the son, whom you need to name, get involved with his two (older?) sisters (i'm assuming and hoping that his other two siblings are both female...another male or two wouldn't be as fun, and would be cause for jealousy imo), or have him and his mom get it on with his girlfriend Bianca. Oh, having him impregnante his mom is a must now. :) Looking forward to more!

I love the story line and I hope you continue it for many more conquests and orgasms....

I love the idea of a single man taking care of, very well it seams, many ladies, sisters, girlfriend, mom's friends or whomever you feel like satisfying.

If this story doesn't get your fire burning, your woods wet! The couple actually tried to show some restraint and should get some credit for that. It did take 3 pages to tell the story of just one session, that's restraint. The "text messages" were very realistic, perhaps unfamiliar to some people.

part2 fast please

I really enjoyed reading your story, and will be watching for the next chapter.I do hope that the son gets to make his mother pregnant, that would be so sexy, and a way to bring the son and mother even closer.I do think that the son should show his mother a lot more love, and help her around the house, cleaning and cooking so that when she is big with his baby she won't have to do much at home.He could become the concerned father of the child, wanting to take care of the woman that's carrying his baby...Rich

naughty n cool.... certainly kept u on the edge...

Great story loved every word of it and can't wait for the next chapter

I liked the story, but half of it just seemed to be some variation of the word fuck, definite room for improvemnt, though I'll be reading some other stuff by you!

Loved the story and look forward to it's continuation.

I cant wait for more, what a great fucking story. I loved the text idea and I would love to see it carried on in the next part, maybe while the husband is home and doesn't know what is going on between his wife and his son. You could go anywhere with this story and i look forward to reading more and more of it. Excellent story.

GREAT Story....Can't Wait for Part 2....Hope it comes soon.....

the beauty of the story lies in the subtleness combined with the most balatant taboo, i.e. mom son incest

Great story. Please don't keep us waiting too much longer for the rest of this story.

Very sexy

Hot sex between mom and son is always erotic. Well written and very explicit and descriptive.

Thanks for the good read

What a great story. I loved the texting.

Author is very skilled in making you feel like you are right there

Very nice :) Let's just say this really helped me out :) Very talented writer :) Keep up the good work.... I'll be back :)

I can not get enough of this story. I've read it at least five times. The mother and son are so hot. You really feel like you're there with them. Thank you for writing it and hopefully we will get part three some day.

I love this story!

Ive been reading stories here for a while now and i think by far.......This is one of the best ones I've read in a long time if not THE BEST EVER

I'm sorry, but this needs a ton of editing. It's a really great story though. It's lines like this example here:

I chuckled again, heck, I'm care free, I'm a rebel, it's expected of me to make light of every situation, why be serious, if all else fails I could bribe her to buy me some more beer, the good stuff, not the crap that my father drinks.

It's almost a total run on sentence. It should read:

I chuckled again. Heck, I'm care free. I'm a rebel. It's expected of me to make light of every situation. Why be serious? If all else fails, I could bribe her to buy me some more beer - the good stuff - not the crap that my father drinks.

Hope that helps.

Fabulous story so nicely penned!

Next channel should see the son trying hard to pout a baby in her mom's woumb making her belly swell beautifully and have her tits full of milk!

Bloody hot as hell mate , keep it up

I seem to remember a Rachel Steele video of exactly this scenario with some of the exact same dialogue.

Hopefully you won't involve anyone else in it, it's perfect just between naughty mom and son. This was super hot.

I just have one question. Why does a married woman that is trying to get pregnant with her husband, carry condoms in her purse? I think she might be even naughtier than we are led to believe. When she pulled the condom from her purse, I knew for sure that the text message at the beginning was not intended for her husband or her son, but for someone else. Naughty mommy.

Best Ever

Damn, this story is the hottest Mother Son story I have read in decades. I was hard the whole story. Can't wait for pt 2.

Sooooo Naughty!