All Comments on 'A Need to Be Seen'

by KnottLynnHardey

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girlypop21girlypop212 months ago

Hottest thing I’ve been read. I’m a virgin which made it that much better!!

Larry1952Larry19522 months ago

Deliciously erotic and very hot. Love your vivid descriptions of your emotions.

DrizdartDrizdart2 months ago

The development was really, REALLY hot.

I wish there hadn't been the scene of payment at the end. It would have been hotter for her to realize the power, and then exercise it to find a way to support her life

-- getting a scholarship as a dance student, who thoroughly enjoyed her academic performance space and the fact she was better than she ever had been in high school.

--- as someone who danced at clubs or online

-- and eventually, as someone who found a patron who could become a lover.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

having run a building company for many years I can confirm that some women love to display themselves as long as the watchers are a little dish-tant, maybe on a scaffold next door ..... or whatever;

it rarely goes further in real life

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

That was an amazing story. I felt like I was her. Great writing! Hopefully this character will be in more stories!

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago
Loved this!

A really good story, very well written.

Just a pity she decided to go down the 'professional' route. I kind of wanted this to turn out nicer for both of them.

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Amazing start to the story, loved the description of feelings and her motivation to keep pushing further. Can't wait for part 2

robertjohnrobertjohnabout 2 months ago

A great story. I loved the slow progression as she discovered her sexuality. I am looking forward now to reading more about her having sex for money.

KnottLynnHardeyKnottLynnHardeyabout 2 months agoAuthor

Thank you so much everyone!

A Need To Be Paid is now available!

zephyerzephyer18 days ago

You are a wonderful writer! I wish I had your command of words.

I had a coworker that admitted when she was in a college sorority that she and the other ladies would sometimes have pillow fights in bras and panties in front of open windows that bordered a frat house. Just to tease the men.

I wonder how often women give an "accidental" flash on purpose.

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