All Comments on 'A New Dawn Ch. 06'

... is a conglomeration of the beginnings of three different stories that I started at different times and never finished. I had a day off and was going to start yet another story but decided to try and weave these three together instead. It may be a little sketchy, but at least I finally got something published after a long dry spell. Thanks for reading.

Love this story, and love all you other stories. If you write it I will most definitely read it. No matter how long I have to wait to read them. 5 stars

This is another chapter in one of the wonderful stories you write. Thanks for coming back and please DO NOT make as wait another 2 years.

I really do enjoy you work.

the adultery is really souring an otherwise light, fun, "Jack-Reacher-esque" romp. Yeah, I know, "it's not cheating if-!" I know, and I would find that belief amusing if it wasn't (in my judgmental opinion) so sickening. Other than that, you've got a great story here. I adored the first few in the series, but ever since you introduced the cheating and swapping, my enthusiasm has greatly cooled. I started this entry (in the series) hoping there'd be no mention of the adultery and swapping that took place in the previous entry. Sadly that hope was dashed, but I persevere because I love your work, and because I have an endless reserve of hope and naïveté. (Lol) All that aside, I "squee!'d when I saw you had published a new work. Welcome back!!!! :-D

Please don't hold out as long before you add the next installment great read he's like Bruce Lee and James Bond rolled into one can't wait to read what happens next 5 stars all the way more if I could

I wandered into this one and read all the way thru ... I'll wait for the next addition but not too long I hope.

We all know how hard it can be to make the words and stories come — but by sticking at it and bringing something new into the world, you add to our lives. Thank you.

Any chance that you can bring in Christine to help solve the problem?

Your stories are Awesome hoping for more soon

This whole series was absolutely amazing and wonderful, I truly enjoyed every word of it. I'd love to say continue, but perhaps you're bored with it, but I would still love it if you did. You deserved every star. I haven't read a story this awesome for a very very long time.

Thank you

I love this series. I can't wait till the next chapter.

This story is something that could be turned into an excellent full novel. The only problem is there seems to be some chapters missing. I'm sitting here on the edge of my chair hitting refresh but I can't find ch 7....

please post new chapters quickly

The characters in this series are well rounded, funny, sincere and your writing keeps me reading fast! Please hurry with more chapters so you can wrap up this very good series and characters!! Keep up the good work😊.

More To This Series Please!!

this series should seriously be turned into a movie or better yet a tv series.one of the best stories out there and so are your others I have read all of them and I thank you for writing.

I hope the author writes more of this series.

It looks like another segment is coming but when - it's been +9mo since #6?

Well edited too, seems to be rare here lately - and few typos too.

Should we count on one segment a year - like the Jesse Stone movies? KRD

Great stories I hope there's a follow-up. Thank you

Two years between chapters five and six, do we have to wait until 2017 for chapter 7? Please not

Loved it, but feel left on a cliff-hanger after reading chapter 6 . . . please give more!

love you story cant wait for chapter 7

Re-resd chapters 1-5 and just finished this chapter. I love the whole series. Please continue with the series. The story is very interesting and the sex is great. Maybe in an other chapter or two the foursome could become a true family with all three ladies wanting to have children with you. Just a thought!

Can't wait for the next installment. Thank you for sharing your writing talent with us!!

I cant wait for the next chapter.This is the best written story I have ever read on this site.Thank you.More please!

Orthopode said: "do we have to wait until 2017 for chapter 7?"

Considering that it's 23rd December 2016 as I write this comment, it seems that the answer is "Yes".

Please keep on with this story. As someone who has never written fiction, I appreciate that it isn't as easy as just saying "I'll write chapter 7 today", so I'm willing to wait.

I really love that you didn't have all the girls loving anal. It's more realistic this way, and whilst I'll probably still have to put up with anal in your stories, or at least "finger in the ass", at least there won't just be anal sex.

What's Johny's limit? Cara seems to have become part of the harem for now, Melanie seems interested, and Laura seems to be a certain addition once she turns 18.

I have very much enjoyed this story thus far, and expect to enjoy the next chapters.

My suggestion is this, and don't think I do not enjoy good stories for free, But have you ever considered self publishing EBooks on Amazon or Barnes & Nobel?

I occasionally do free beta reads for an author Named Sean Liebling, he has several series, self published and sold online at Amazon.com. He writes fiction with Very graphic sexual situations. The first of his books I read I bought on Amazon titled "Blood, Brains & Bullets" . Read that and you'll know I write the truth. You could actually flesh out 2-3 chapters here into a book each.

There, that's my suggestion

For me, these stories have been quite wonderful. It's part of what storytelling is all about, adventures we will never see in real life. It provides a wonderful escape to have these kinds of fantasies. It's a big reason I watch movies and TV shows, same thing. Very cool and well done :).

I love this series but I have a real problem with the relationship between Tina and Johnny . You have Dawn wanting to fuck Robert but Robert hasn’t touched her because he knows Johnny loves her and doesn’t want that but Tina is suppose to be in love with Robert who offered to give up all others for her yet you have her tongue fucking Johnny and sucking his dick. You are making it look ok that she is doing that and that Johnny is honorable because he hasn’t stuck his dick in her yet!!! Tina is a slut who has become disrespectful and disloyal to Robert and Robert should send her ass to Johnny and never let her speak to him or come on his property.. please stop the charade and just have her go join Johnny’s group instead of basically making a fool out of Robert who has been an honorable friend and helper to Johnny!! This seem to really nag at me because it seems deceitful and disrespectful and I hate how you have treated this relationship..

I absolutely love this story but the mother/daughter sex really, really grosses me out! The other stuff, cool but that, ewwww! It’s just different strokes for different folks though.

I liked ass night, but just plunging in to virgin assholes is a lot so good thing; ripping is a definite possibility, not to mention the pain. Otherwise...

Then there are the maids; one with a degree in criminology. What's up with that?

Had to give a 4 on this one.

Sorry but I forgot this part too. In one sentence: the Robert, Tina, Johnny, and Dawn situation is fucked up.

Loving the ass moves and the description of “mum” voluptuous does it for me.

Omg it just gets better and better, so fucking red hot. The lucky fucker wallowing in all those lush cunts totally pissed on cunt nectar. Cunt lapping sex maniac Lanc’s UK.

Excellent erotics but I just loved the new twist about going back to help the chief.

5*

BJ

Another FIVE. Fantastic series!

I don't usually leave comments about the stories I read on Literotica but just felt I had to say how much I'm enjoying this A New Dawn series, it's brilliant despite being a bit unbelievable. I can't wait to see what happens next, Chucks, please keep up the good work, another FIVE.

I thought "Houston, we have lift off" was my favorite line in the whole story (New Dawn 1-6)... until just now, when I read Meyer's response to Johnny telling him the Chief's idea of them coming back to the force to investigate this new case - the absolutely perfect Meyer (and perfect cop-humor) response:

"Oh, great," he said. "I always wanted to be a cop."

There have been plenty of great lines, including Johnny's response to Meyer's question about whether Johnny's girls didn't find his beard scratchy. But you've had terrific lines throughout this whole saga (and I use that word in the best sense), including Meyer's addition to the ladies explaining to Johnny why they made sure there was always one of them nude, holding him through his fever sweats (or Johnny's response to Meyer for that matter). It is one more aspect of your writing that makes it a delight to read (and that is maybe the 2nd or 3rd time I've ever used "delight" in a sentence in my whole life). By the way, I believe I've noticed a comment or two about some aspect(s) of the story being unbelievable. Yeah? So f-ing what? Its a STORY!

Great job, great story, great work.

A cliffhanger, well planned out, great flow, and.... thank you.