All Comments on 'A New Dawn Ch. 07'

I can't wait for them to kick some ass. Thanks

I hope we get to kick some ass soon please. Now where is Cara? I wonder when Mary-Beth, Dawn & Jay are going to have some babies. I reckon they have had enough practice by now.

But that's what ya get with a teaser for an author!🤔😒

Here's to hoping the next installment comes down the pike soon.🤘

Do I really hafta say(by now) how I voted?

Please get the next chapter out soon and what happened with the investigation at station with missing evidence etc? (Or did I miss something).

So relieved you're still writing these guys. Also, cool if maddeningly brief new instalment!

A great continuation of the story, so glad you are back. Also, for some reason Chapter 1 is missing from the story. Since this is a re-read for me I did not mind since I remembered Chapter 1, but new readers will be lost. Keep up the good work.

I hope you can give us an UPDATE soon!

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You are good enough to write a series of books that cover these characters. Like some others though, I was disappointed with this last chapter. It would be great to redo chapter 7 and cover what was missed then continue with the story.

This is an outstanding story. It would be so very much better if YOU FINISH it!!!

WTF?

Story was great, but wanted to see Johnny getting Dawn pregnant, only Dawn. Also wanted Thomas getting Tina, and only Tina, pregnant. Feel like story ended on cliffhanger that’s need to have an ending.

interesting...

Confusing, very much so!

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BJ

What happened to Mary Beth's mother? Me being older I thought she was quite nice lol.

New direction! Way to execute the foreshadowing of Christine and Melanie! Love it! Thank you!