All Comments on 'A New Dawn Ch. 08'

This had me thinking the 1970's until the very end when I looked back to the beginning for a clue.

Really hope you continue great story line wonderful characters and I’d continue to read it if you’ll just write it and submit it 5 stars all the way and I hope it doesn’t take as long for the next one 😀

Thank you so much for continuing the story, Kimmy is very bright.

It's great that you're carrying on with this story I hope there's much more to come and your able to have the next chapter soon.

Im really enjoying this story. I can't wait for more. Keep up the good work!!!

...by this latest chapter. It was fine enough in of itself, but seemed a bit superfluous. Why no sex? Why no incest, more importantly? Is the new girl being introduced as a new sexual partner at some point down the line (once she's reached the magic age of 18)? Is there a long term plan in play?

All in all, a shrug of indifference from me for this one.

... no problem, in this case.

Just keep it going!

Really enjoy the story. Cant wait for the next part keep up the good work.

I too hope there are more chapters coming of A New Dawn

We know all the characters and names in this story and it wasn't so bad without the sex, even for some readers (fans) it should be confront them if they read a girl is raped... The law is hard for offenders and in prison there it's much harder as a sex-offender.

So to push some readers with their noses to the facts is no big deal for others.

Of course the author 'Chunks' will write more chapters (I hope so) for us readers :-) . It strikes me that in the beginning all chapters had a chain between each other; emotional I thought chapter 07 was not finished and chapter 08 had the same persons in it, but it became a single story (no chain between 07 & 08)

But even thanks for writing and posting it,

Eglefino

Forget the haters. This was a wonderful story of Johnny Rand and the way he protects his girls! Keep up the great work. Can't wait for the next installment!

When is the next chapter on its way

One of the best series of a storyline I have ever read covering 65 years. Please continue this series.

An excellent series. Please continue.

Keep up good work! I hope you keep story going!!

I absolutely loved this story and the whole story line.I really don't judge a story on grammar and spelling, I judge a story on how much I liked it. Of course some stories from other Authors are so bad that I just don't read them. I love your stories and this ending on this story line just screams for at least one more chapter or several. PLEASE

Please don't let this be the last chapter of this story.

Kimmy and the chief and everyone else needs the ring to be taken down.

I know a few people have griped about realism, but I view this as an old fashioned superhero story. I really enjoy how perfect everyone is. You hire ScarJo to play Black Widow because ... Superheroes are superlative.

Great job. I really enjoy your writing and hope you are able to come back to it.

loved this whole series of stories .. it needs more to close it though ... any more coming ?

Please tell me this isn't the end of the story. I'm loving the whole anihero vibe it puts off and want to know what happens with little Kimmy in her new life.

Please keep it going!

I echo the others in wanting more of this story. :) Please?

I really have enjoyed this series.It broke my heart when he met the folks in the mansion and broke down saying that he was in love and couldn't share that joy and why. I still don't enjoy stories about or have tolerance of incest, but I like good writing, romance, trust, respect. I agree with the comment (Beyluvhey 7 19 19) that this is more of a super hero thing,

It seems like there are some holes in the storyline.

This is the second time that I have read through your collection, and I sincerely hope that you are able and willing to continue writing on whatever story line you find interesting.

This story is very enjoyable and proves that not every chapter has to be sex scene heavy. I definitely hope that you continue this series.

You have s great story line with this series, it jumped a little in between a couple of the chapters but this story needs to be continued to get to an ending point. You have the perfect blend of story and sex, it would be a shame to leave it hanging like this!

Wow. I sure hope there are more chapters of this story coming (cumming)...

Fabulous series! Kept me on edge all of the time. Thanks

I'be enjoyed this series since it'seems beginning. Just based on the quality alone it deserves more.

THANK YOU!

When is chapter 9 coming out.

I love it. This is the first series in a long time that I've given 5's. When can I expect more? Please.

Good, but would’ve been better with an actual ending and not a cliffhanger

good story...

Since this was your last work written in 2018, I'm hoping everything is OK down your way. Amazing story, I really hope you get back to continuing this great story

I realize that with there being no more chapters since 2018 that I may be writing this comment to a COVID victim - and I seriously hope that is NOT the case - hopefully you are well

This series is excellent and I just binge read all 8 chapters - there are just SOOOO many possibilities for it to go forward - including spin off story lines.

If you are still ok and writing - even if it is under another handle - find a way to keep them moving forward.

Another masterpiece. I would have liked to read about the demise of those who had harmed Kimmy.

6*

BJ

Love this story you really should pick it up again there are unlimited possibilities and it’s bloody worth it.

Wish there was more. Love this story

I wish you did an Epilogue, at least. Hopefully a sort of "happily ever after" ending!

5 stars for every part.

Thanks

In less than 5 years Johnny will be Fucking Kimmy...

The ending made smoke in my eyes. You are an excellent writer. FIVE!

Excellentconclusion to this episode!! Now, on to the next! Thank you!