All Comments on 'A New Pussy in My Home Ch. 01'

venerable / vulnerable; pedals / petals; in tact / intact. All should have been noticed on the read through;

needs editing, good story, distracting errors

this story was okay. couple things bugged me. it's the second story in a row where the author used the word venerable when they meant vulnerable. also, i'm pretty sure you can't finger a girl's g-spot if she's still got her cherry. i've only ever slept with one virgin and at the time i couldn't find the g-spot with a map but still... pretty sure that's how it works. i don't know.

I loved this Chapter. I'll keep reading.

What a great story!!!! So hot,sexy,and romantic!!!!! Good job!!!! Thank you!!!!

To each his own, of course, but a turn-off for many.

She was a virgin yet he took no precautions for safe sex???

Nice first time storyline, Thanks for sharing.

Wonderful story. They will both be proud, when she says, "this is my HUSBAND, the loving father of OUR children".