by Many Feathers
Somehow though, i think it was a little too long.
Good one though
You've turned off your voting so I guess I'll have to comment on your story and let you know I really enjoyed it rather than giving you a 5 and skipping merrily along to your next submission. It was a bit long but I loved the hot tub and the New Years trophy. Thanks again for creating a wonderful fantasy for all of us to enjoy.
Lady Lay
Just wanted to say that this was a great story and to keep up the awesome writing. Looking forward to reading your other stories.
I liked the variety and the game nature of the story. It was very playful, while being extremely erotic. An interesting concept---the 2 weeks of fun. Nicely done, friend. Hostess
that was a truly awsome tale, loved every bit, kept me horny the whole time. terrific idea having just 2 weeks every year to let yourself go. personally i think david should have porked dawn more.
Oh, to be that lucky "Naughty" guy!
If this story was using the 'star' rating system, it would surely have a whole lot of 5's.
An interesting concept of very limited swinging. For some reason, the 5-star grading system did not appear after the end of the story.
Very creative, imaginative and stimulating. Naughty self is now one of my favorite characters!
That's not fair as this one DOES deserve five!
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Another great story from one of my favourite authors on this site....well done.
5 STARS!!
I want to party like that next Christmas. Not sure I could live through it but what a way to go........
In the meantime, I'll paint 5 Bright and Shiny Stars on my cock for this story.
As with most of your stories, this one is absolutely fantastic. I’m glad it was longer than the previous ones I’ve read. I’m reading through the rest now in order 😜
Great story
Got so hard I couldn’t make it to the end😉
I’ll come back and try to show a little more restraint
Thanks for taking the time to write!!!!
I LOVED this story. I've been reading it over the past few weeks, a little at a time as it makes me very horny! I really enjoyed the length and am rushing to go read more from the same author. Deliciously dirty - bravo!