All Comments on 'A New York City Romance'

by Dani-Amande

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
very nice!

Great story, would love to see more.

afrodita79afrodita79over 11 years ago
love it

hope you post soon more of them... just love them bout especially Stephanie son post more and soon please

desireethtttvdesireethtttvover 11 years ago
Best story ever.......

From the descriptiveness of getting dressed to the dance to the seduction, this is by far the most romantic story I've read here in a long while. Simply perfect.

kuroukiphoenyxkuroukiphoenyxover 11 years ago

THIS BETTER CONTINUE!!!

mumblegooseeggmumblegooseeggover 11 years ago
Loved it

A perfect five. And I don't mind if the series does not continue -- to me, the seduction is the important part. These two seduced each other and made me feel warm all over. (Not to mention hard!)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Welcome back!

It was a long wait, but worth it. Please write more.

shyangel_62shyangel_62over 11 years ago
More please

Please can you right more about this couple

I'll keep looking out for it

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Cliff

Don't leave us hanging! Give us more!

Joscelyn2tgJoscelyn2tgover 10 years ago
Loved Absolutely Every Word...

...But my only disappointment was no further chapters to read about Stephanie and Daniel. This was a fun read, and enjoyed all of it, from her dancing escapade, to winning Daniel over one date at a time. Such a romantic and fun piece of eroticism! Thank you for sharing this beautiful story, and it biggest flaw is no follow-up, so PLEASE write more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

A very nice story I wish I could meet a guy like that dress up for him in my favourite pvc outfit, shiny red thigh boots matching pvc micro mini dress and tight pvc top. Full make shiny lipstick to kiss his lips and suck his hard cock till he came in my mouth. Then i would get him to push his hard cock up my eager arse an fuck me all night as I spunked all over the bed.I once met a cute guy and we made out in my car the only time I have had my ass fucked I made a real mess on the seats when i shot sperm all over the place. I never saw him again I dream of him and wank myself hard thinking of him.

ColonelinguistColonelinguist11 months ago

I like this story Dani! It’s just that I think it needs more content IMO.

Too many stories on this platform are way too long, so I’m not speaking about it’s length, but think you may want to spend more time on describing your characters emotions, and their actual sexual encounters.

I hope my observation makes your already strong writing skills even better though.

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