All Comments on 'A Night in Brighton'

Very well done.

Thank you

There is a rewrite due out soon. As soon as I published it, a story that I wrote in 3 days, I realised that the story was still in its raw chronological state and needed an urgent rewrite, which should publish tomorrow.

a good idea, leave them in a cup but don't drink the water. Grate story!

When is the rewrite coming?

It was submitted on or around 3rd March. Whether it was in place when you read it and commented, I really don't know.

I saw it now. Actually I like both versions (I downloaded the chronological one).

What a story. Glad I got around to seeing this.

As always a good story with a happy ending.

Great story - very entertaining and suspenseful. Erotic description of loving

I was born in England in 52 to European parents but haven't lived there since 68, so I a kind of "cameo memory" of life at that time. For that reason, apart from the actual plot, I loved the setting and feel of your story. Thank you.