by MSTarot
I have read some 4 and 5 pagers that did not say as much as this one. Thanks for sharing.
Many people seem to take for granted that those we love wil continue on after we pass. No one ever can truly predict how they will respond to the death of a loved one. I like to think that if anyone in my family were to pass that I would soldier on...your story made me wonder just how successful at it I would be.
How would I deal with the emotions of it? Would I think the same way,that I wasn't "Good enough" to save them? That I somehow let them down? Good story. Surprised it rated so low. Probably because you didn't have mind altering, cum-swapping, nasty sweaty sex. :-)
I don't think that was applicable to this story at all. You did it as Goldilocks said, "Just right!"
Sincerely, Payenbrant
"A Night In The Cove:" - An extremely thought-provoking story, of deep, true love.....and love lost, and found anew! A unique twist on why life matters, and what matters most. The human life has the capacity to have more than one true, honest love; finding a second passionate honorable deep defining love IS possible. Though the story is short, the message is long. The writer 'MSTarot' has written a provoking story of life and love, and if either matters to survivors/
A mediocre story about a man infatuated with a woman old enough to be his mother.
I liked this even though it’s not usually my cup of tea. It’s a powerful tale that I hope has a happy ending. The first non-ending story that I liked.
Bill S.