All Comments on 'A Night to Remember'

This is exactly what I was thinking of doing with my step dad Rick. He refused to give in to me teasing him, so I thought I would get him drunk and force myself on him. Great story! I'm stacy18_bi at Hotmail if you want to hit me up

Really enjoyed the story - any more to cum?

Say they are playing stud, where ties are determined by suit, but then talk of discards and new cards, making it a game of draw poker, where the suits are meaningless and ties are broken by next high card.

Really distracted me from the story.

Was literally staring at poker rules to make sure I wasn't fucking things up while writing this, has been a few years since I played last though I used to play all the time, but one can easily write off any mistakes as just them being drunk. If you're wrapped up in the card game part of the story you should probably be reading card game stories instead of erotica, hahaha. Just a suggestion.

But yes, there will be more though unsure if I'll be revisiting this pairing or not. Depends on how much interest this draws.

I want more please

Really enjoyed it. I feel like the key to good erotica is setting up a scenario that pushes people to behave abnormally, but in a realistic way. The story is of course unrealistic, but it gives the impression of plausibility. Very well done!

One gripe: the poker. I know you addressed you were looking up the rules while you were writing :) I just want to point out that the hands these people were being dealt were beyond amazing. I mean, just the final hand alone. The odds of being dealt a royal flush before exchanging any cards are 1 in 649,740 deals. The odds of a being dealt a normal straight flush are 1 in 72,192. The odds of both showing up at the same time? O__O

I really appreciate the effort you took to make the scenario realistic and have the game follow the rules. Just might want to check the odds next time!

It would be nice to get a “The Next Morning” follow up to this or the next morning until they have sex again. Maybe something with the daughter Sabine asking questions about oral sex, condoms, positions, anal, and dad demonstrates; or in the morning she joins dad in the shower while he feels guilty over what he has done; or maybe daughter wakes up first to see dad’s morning wood and wants to feel him again.

From the description I thought there was going to be a build up of sexual acts.