by gotwood49
...hot story! Wonderfully written, good grammar and spelling as well. Every act, motion, and sound came across realistically. Good work!
The LogoPhile is speechless. Your story was hypnotic and fabulous. Ah, yeah, hmm, yup just about speechless. Thanks so much for this one.
Very sensual and arousing. Great imagination and wonderful story telling. Mmmm thanks for the inspiration.
Fantastic story, Woody! I believe you captured the moment perfectly!
~Honey
Hot and warmly loving at the same time - I'm melting in the glow of MY computer screen.
awesome and hot hot hot!
great job, handsome! cant wait for more. love the threesome at the end....very sweet indeed.
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Although, calling the other person a 'girl' and saying she was 'young' left a sour taste in my mouth.
Otherwise, very well written.
Darlin', made me feel that I was your lusty subject,mmmmm....Very Hot!! I love the way you think!
Great story, Woody....so incredibly hot.....not sure which girl I'm more jealous of at this point. *giggles*