All Comments on 'A Night With Rachel Ch. 00'

Wow- what a very sexy story. well written, great dialogue. It's hard to make phone conversations sound real - yours did!

A model or something, the banter is cool, but, that's about it.

Not a clue as to who Rachel is.

That's what I said to myself as I finished:

Wow.

Paul in Oklahoma

P.S. Not that "Erotic Couplings" is wrong, because it was certainly that; but, it seems to me like the beginnings of a great "Romance."

P.P.S. Since these nights with Drea are a prequel to

A Night With Rachel,

does this anticipate another hot woman coming into his life (preferably, their lives)?

Well, that makes me want to read on.

Beautiful! I started reading the story with this prequel. This is incredible writing. I love these people and it's hard to believe that they are imaginary. I hope you are still there and still writing. You have a real gift.