All Comments on 'A Nude Troubadours Production'

What a wonderful take on Shakespeare. I loved the story, thankyou

An outstanding story. One can only wish to have been Dan or Kate.

From start to finish, a great set up, well written, enjoyable characters. Thanks.

Imagine what they could have snuck into the subsequent performances! ;-)

Great read!!!!

Your stories always describe so wonderfully the full, complicated spectrum of emotions and feelings experienced by real people in their real inner lives. I loved the scene when Kate tells her family what she is up to. It was frank, awkward, unresolved, and each of the participants' reactions were realistic and believable. It wouldn't even have occurred to many authors to write a scene like this, but it certainly was an integral element of Kate's story. The interplay of dramatic plot, troupe camaraderie, audience awareness, exhibitionist exuberance, and smell (!) during the performance was very well done. And then the delicious afterplay! And then the clapping from the shadows! Your stories are deep, intelligent, and very engaging. Thanks so much for writing them.

This both made me feel like I was really watching it and feel like I was experiencing it at the same time. Great job detailing the emotions, thoughts and actions while weaving in some Shakespeare to boot! Five stars!

Hey, thanks so much everyone! I'm grateful for your reads and really appreciate your feedback. It was a fun challenge to weave a little bit of Shakespeare into a light-hearted exhibitionism story. Happy Nude Day!

He wrote some bawdy stuff, so he'd have enjoyed a Nude Troubadours Production.

Great story. Good luck in the contest.

Would have given it 5 stars as I loved the whole thing, brilliant concept, well told, good start, middle and ending and a nice twist at the ending. Settled on 4 stars though as the one missing point for me would have been the response of her family or perhaps an extra twist at the end to discover they were not the only ones on stage.

Thanks for the feedback anon! Privates1stClass: Ha, I like to imagine he would! Thanks everyone for your votes and support.

I really enjoyed the wholesomeness and believability of your characters. While I expected her brother to come out of f the shadows, the cast mates were a nice surprise. Looking forward to reading more of your stories. Well done!

This story exactly tickles my kinks. It is written beautifully with believable inner dialog and steamy hot sex. I was in Kate's head the whole time. I listened through headphones while my phone read it to see on a long drive. [I was in the passenger seat] I would have cum in the car somewhere around Columbia SC if the kids hadn't been in the back.

@A_Little_Show: LOL what a great comment! Thanks so much!

A slap yo momma amazing with your story telling.

With the cleverness of its construction. And hot sex :)

Brilliant. Beautifully written. The Shakespearean-styled quotes are perfect.

So nice and juicy and enthusiastic. Full of the joys of discovery and excess!

pure awesomeness :)

All that fun without a single’Turgid!’ Lol. Fun!

Good story, would have liked to hear what the family thought of seeing their daughter naked on stage and how she moved on from there. Was she ever naked at home in front of her father or brother. Think there could be another chapter.