All Comments on 'A Pair of Objects Walk into a Bar'

by YKN4949

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PangeriPangerialmost 7 years ago

Incredible! Absolutely brilliant! Very well done

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
nice writing, but

politics realy kill my mood. Kinda glaring that you dislike dudes. I can assure you that there are good guys out there.

xploring96xploring96almost 7 years ago

Sexy sexy sexy. I would love to make love to either one of those women.

thebarwellthebarwellalmost 7 years ago

I hope that you write a sequel, because I enjoyed this alot!

BaddGrrlBaddGrrlalmost 7 years ago
"The Midget's Lament"

Dory Previn wrote a story about perceptions - "The Midget's Lament": https://youtu.be/0XaorwdqcZc

sambrownsambrownalmost 7 years ago
Well I for one enjoyed it

Contrary to a couple of commentators I thought it was a good original script, the play between the characters had a healthy dose of reality to it and whilst I have neither of the challenges the players have I didn't read anything which I thought might cause offence, oh and the sex was pretty good too!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Love Story

I thought this was a wonderful love story

CliterateDykeCliterateDykealmost 7 years ago

The beauty of the prose was stunning at times, utterly brilliant. This was one of the most poignant, loving & deeply meaningful pieces I've read on Literotica. Honestly, the story is simply amazing & one of your best stories. Thank you so much for continuing to share you gifted writings with us.

rockyracoon2512rockyracoon2512almost 7 years ago
Wonderful

A wonderful story. Loved it

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
So good!

Bravo

leroi4747leroi4747over 6 years ago
Connection

A relationship that all lovers should desire, beyond the sex, becoming one.

lespoon1lespoon1almost 6 years ago
Moving beyond the stars available

I know a little about what it means to be objectified. As a bi-lateral amputee (BK) I've lived it. I once had to do the walk of shame (on crutches for cripes sake) after a doctor drove me home on very early morning without speaking to me. He just dropped me and tore off. I certainly appreciated your story and it's happy ending. Thanks for your sensitive portrayal of two very human persons.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
More

More if these two are needed yes

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
WOW!!!

Very, Very Sexy. Loved this one. If possible more please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Story

I Liked much more than the stars show, I'm just a novice, so please forgive me

ChironomidChironomidover 3 years ago

YKN, you have some of the most interesting stories in Literotica. The range of stories, their sexiness and originality are breathtaking. This story is sensitive to the characters' differences and made me think of human relations in a different way. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Wow

Great and wonderful story, not a fantasy but feeling very real.

DUBLXLDUBLXLabout 3 years ago
Hott

Don’t concern yourself about the polish and shine. If someone is distracted by grammar, then they weren’t into your story in the first place. Great experience, thanks.

Sausage17Sausage17almost 3 years ago

That was simultaneously really great character work and chemistry and very, very hot. Great job, 5 stars!

megalodon_megalodon_over 2 years ago

oh my god this was so great. the connection between the two characters just added to how hot the story was overall. so human, so real, absolutely amazing. thanks for sharing your work

megalodon_megalodon_over 2 years ago

oh my god this was amazing. the connection between the characters adds to how hot the scene is. really enjoyed reading this, thanks for sharing your work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I found this story very erotic and compelling and also made me question myself since I do and would say that I would have viewed both women in the same way , and probably still would even as I hope I would simply see them as beautiful attractive people

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Very good kept me interested the whole time

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Fuck you and your political view. Not here for that. Just wanted to relax and read some smut, and you fucked it up. If I wanted politics I could watch tv, or read an online paper. Just couldn’t step away for awhile could you. Seems to me you have the problem. Not Trump.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Lmao at the butthurt Trump fangirl, maybe a 1st person story where you get to suck him off would make you feel better. Great story as usual!

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