All Comments on 'A Party In Her Panties'

This comment has to do with all rather than only one of your stories. They are excellent. You have a way of communicating the way your characters feel and how their excitement is building that totally brings the reader into the story. It makes the story extremely exciting! Thank you.

Sally, you are a talented writer....I love how you write, and how you take your time, letting the story build...lets me get into the story too, feeling all the emotions and sensations of the characters.......

Your husband is a lucky man, to have a wife with such passion and imagination ! I love all your stories, and look forward to reading them............please write more!

You are my favorite author in literotica, and your stories never fail to take me over the edge......thank you!!

I wish I could get my wife to take on other lovers too....very hot! .....

I really like your stories ... this one was hot, hot, hot!!!

This was a fabulous story! I loved it. I wonder how often something like this has actually happened?

Keep up the great stories.

I will give anything to have some adventure like this, you have a terrific imagination.

Great!!!

The "author" have no idea of story structure, character build up or even literacy sometimes. Just mindless writ of dirty sex. That is probably why she give up her job as a toilet attendant.

Oh fucking wonderful Sally, you are fabjulous with the fucking, sucking and cumming descriptions. I have been reading you all day. Now I am totally fucked out with the creaming I have done, and the fucking and sucking with my girl friend and her best mate, we are all fucked up. B in the Uk. more and from your pen please, you beautiful sex mad cunt.

This mindless diatribe of a mentally deficient "writer" is a typical of an asylum inmate. This idiocy is apparently shared by all the trailer park anons commenting. Why in hell don't those people don't dispose themselves in meat processing plant ???????

I loved it!

I loved the story. It was great!

However, it needs very badly to be edited. You mentioned kissing "Steve" when you meant "Chuck" and your grammar is very bad.

Please let someone knowledgable in English proof-read your stories.

Very good story-line.

While the story was well written I find that most stories by women or from their perspective seem to make the husband a wimp or try to belittle him. In this story one the wife decided to live up to husband desires she should have talked to him about it instead of just breaking the wedding vowes... This could have led to a wife swap or a number of other things. Stories like this help men understand why they for the most part dont trust the ladies. This story need a 4 for a rating but it only gets a 1 from me... till you chang the ending...

old folks

When does it become necessary to do an edit job ? Before you hit send, comes to mind. It was a good story but the grammatical errors are too many and very obvious.

This has great detail and I love how imaginative you are! Exciting story-line too! While reading this I was sexting my boyfriend and ended up fingering myself and was dripping cummmmm!!!! Got so hot, I never cummed like that before! Your story did it for me. Keep writing!

did you pass junior high English?

me and my husband, (sorry he interrupted me again) your stories are the best!

Note to the "know-it-all-assholes" where are the stories you have written? GO BACK TO SCHOOL AND LEARN HOW TO RESPECT OTHERS!!

lesss...

I'd enjoy reading about that Girl Party which had been cancelled. Seems like a chapter 2 would nearly write itself.

What man would let another man fuck his wife and watch. If they were swapping and fucking each others wife fine but to just watch no way.

That was definitely a Party in her panties!

I will look to see if you've written more but I oved it! Good story, good led in...

She was a lucky lady! More!

Thank you, wonderful story. I like that the wife gets so much pleasure, that the husband gets everything that he wants, well basically everyone wins. The way the world should be. No need to have the selfish and the haters, they simply can't understand this. I will pass this on to my wife!

This is a great story but needs some spell checking and editing.

We have done the very same thing except for I did not hide in the closet I said or laid on the bed as she got her pussy eaten and she sucked a big cock then she got the fucking of her life it is so hot to watch your wife taking a big fat strange cock and her he loved it so I agreed if you ever tried it you should your wife will love it and you should also. Have a good day

Nothing but a cum dumpster slut and wimp fag cuck

Again, poor grammar, poor word usage and poor punctuation made the story unreadable.

There really are some spine less ,brain-dead husbands out there.

Can't rate this due to the distractions of incorrect word usage (hey it's better than a 3 or 4 because of it!).

But it was a pretty hot story, pregnacy's not my gig, but as Steve is rich paternity payments shouldn't be an issue...

Would have been better to have Chuck 'catch' them, then join or at least suggest payback.

Any more?

Are you sure this was not written by "Silly Tart"

Loved this story. And loved jerking off and cumming reading it. Fuck it was hot. Will enjoy reading all of your stories.

I totally love a good slut wife story, and you do it every time. You must get so wet cumming up with all these different story idea's

Ohhh i enjoyed this so much the only thing beter would have a foursome. Your story sure helps me out.

I loved it!!! The details you give on the lingerie outfits aaaah I visualized them can you tell us how it feels putting on the lingerie and how it hugs and comforts the women body. Thank you!!

I loved your story. the details were so well described that it gave me an erection even at 81 years old with no viagara. THANK YOU

A hot little tae and a fun read, thanks.

Nice to see another wife lying, manipulating and cheating on her husband; violating her marriage vows without even some guilt or remorse or shame. Fabulous cock-driven marriage!