by geronimo_appleby
Five stars. I can always count on you for a well plotted story. I do see the miriad of possibilities for a continuation . I wil eagerly await any follow up stories. Thanks again for a good story.
I think you better write a follow up. She needs to teach him some control. Fun story.
Once again you never fail to give me a rise, great story. This is your writing and who am I to critique, besides it's a great story. For us who don't write, how can we critique, it's only their opinion and we know what they say about that, lol. Great job, thanks for writing and please keep it going, this story has so much potential. I look forward to a sequel, thanks again 😁😜👍