All Comments on 'A Perfectly Smackable Arse'

OK when are we going to see track 11 performed with sperm in the very willing cunt? Maybe a ruler used as well!

Fantastic story to read and enjoy, love to see some more chapters please

What a woman! i can hear the breath hissing out of her as u punish her ass, i can feel my hand tingle. i came wen u got 2 the part about her tiny tits - i love tiny tits 2 tho maybe u shud have slapped them as well? gimme, gimme, gimme some more!!

This is a very well made story. Oh, and sexy too. I liked the tight, slow build-up and the long, slightly perverse sex scene. Excellent. - jimmy

I love the way you paid so much attention to her breasts. I want to go to my own bed now and imagine the same being done to mine.

lovely slow build up, makes it so believable. I liked it when you wrote "technically you'd be a vixen!"

A terrific story. I LOVE tiny titties too! Helen is a real little vixen. More please!

I knew a girl once who could squeeze her cunt like Helen, not so tight maybe but she could make you come with it. This is a great story, don't worry about it being too long - loved the build up. so which one of them is next? I fancy the one with the big tits for contrast!

Beautifully written, great characters and situation - very authentic, I can easily imagine it happening for real. Perhaps it did? Lovely!

Your sub seems to be quite in charge of what happens to her and this makes it more realistic for me. This is what those of us who actually do like a little pain really prefer... that "safe" feeling. Extreme BDSM has its place but I like this style. Keep it up, love to read about the "home tuition" to follow?

This is the hottest story I've read in years, & well written too.

You HAVE to write more about these two

One of the best texts I have ever read, perfectly telled and written! and I dare say it is utterly English!

Jean-François

Great story! Sexy and well written, my favourite kind!

A lovely, gentle, and wise story. When the classics of this genre are collected, yours should be among the cream.

I want to be across that desk... I sooo want it. I want my bum smacked until it's red and my tits stretched and my nipples squeezed... excuse me. I'm cumming again.

great stuff just drawn out long enough to tantilise then whaack! the cumming on her tits was great. great story, great writing.

Loved it... loved it. Just right, the smacking and cumming and the tiny tits. Best I've read for ages - gave me a great orgasm pulling at my own tiny titties. Shame most think big is better - if only they knew!!

You should've ties her up and fucked her arse mate. i would of. gr8 story tho - another ozzie BDSM lover

Lucky girl - lucky guy! Keep it up, more please. How about the cane across those lovely white buttocks, would she like it? Would she cry out? I think so!

So different from your lesbian stories. what a surprise. Loved it though.

I did not think I would like this after reading your other story as it is about a man but then I got to like it very much because you write so well about punishing small tits. this I like but it is a shame that the woman did not have something in her bottom while she was being smacked, she would have enjoyed this more I think?

Yeah right on. great fucking story loved the tit play. did me in when Helen wanted cum on her tits and when she wanted to leave it their to dry.

This is a very good story to masturbate to. I have read it again after one week and it is just as good. I would like to read more.

I like the first part when you develop the characters and the relationships. I like the second part when Helen dares herself to tell her secret desire. I LOVE the third part when you give her her hearts desire. I love it when you come on her and she leaves it on, so dirty!

I really enjoyed this story. It had just the right balance of elements and wasn't too hardcore. Nice making her tits so small and cumming all over them. Would like to see some more along these lines.

Just that, stunning! Would love to read some more like this.

More please. I LOVE tiny titties too! and smacking a great ass. Would love to find a woman who fits my bill in the meantime your story will do.

Loved the whole meeting in the office later in the evening. Perhaps a paddling would have been nice since she mentioned harder so many times.

Loved it

I don't agree that it's too long; I think it's a Masterpiece. You achieved a beautiful coming together and still made it HOT! Well Done!

I LOVE your storie !!!

It was wonderful, you really have a gift. I can't wait to read what may be next.

What a great story - and so unexpected they way it started. I would LOVE to hear more about this pair. I have tits just like Helen's, now I'm thinking about what it would feel like to have my nipples pinched??

Very real, personable characters and great sex! More?

Not the sort of genre I usually read, but, given your penchant for anal gave it a try...really like the characters, your description of her physically-slim hot blonde milf w/petites + a muffin, gorgeous bum, demanding sub w/superb control of her kegels (her lucky hubby-!)...can cum when she pees..! but tightens involuntarily when she's spanked.

Thought you did a superb job of writing it from male point of view.

Five and fave both story and author-would love it if you'd write some more!

Not more to say English is my reading just fuckin wow

Nice bit of discipline!

I loved this story - a slow build finishing with some very sexy writing. And it helps that I just love girls with small tits and round ripe bums. I think additional chapters would be very well-received (hint!).