by laffalot
Loved the dialogue; nice buildup to the conclusion; calls for sequel; perhaps with the twins where we learn which team Matthew is settling on? Or maybe he decides variety is the spice of life? A choice I would make.FIVE stars!
Shows he is not a bigot as he gives the girl a return of service. Many possibilities for the future. A true gay-straight alliance, for a change.
Your dialogue is superb! I was really drawn into the story and the sex did not disappoint ;)
Great story! Great dialogue! Loved the sex. He should be with her when she tastes her first pussy! *W*
That had happened to me when I was growing up. I was such a dunce that I failed to recognize that girls also had the same wild desires that guys had. I would often have to stop on the way home and relieve myself before continuing.. Keep up the great work. Thanks for sharing
First off, the story is original but believable. Second, your balance of the dialog and the narrative is perfect! And third, the final product is truly erotic without being crude. It's one of my few Favorite stories! Exceptionally well done! I wish you'd write a lot more. :)
I loved reading how Matt and Kayla start out as best friends! How he was and still is gay but is also bi! Most importantly how each we're willing to do for each other and remain best friends!