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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
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Really this time?

I missed chapter 4 because I didn't look for it.

Wobbly1958Wobbly1958about 5 years ago
Enjoying the story

But you need to keep track of character names a bit better. Chapter 4 had William become Michael then back to William. This chapter had Marcella become Loretta briefly. Makes the reader think he/she missed something and affects the story flow.

Meanwhile hoping to see some more antagonists emerging. Keep up the good work.

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