All Comments on 'A Primitive Hope Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Breathtaking!

My God, I don't think I've ever seen a story REALLY explore the marvelous fantasy of female to female impregnation quit the way you did with this masterpiece. You not only captured the need in a woman's heart, but you knocked it out of the park. That's what a good story is supposed to do, transport us to the fantasy and make us really believe it can happen.

I also LOVED how the Mother/Kristen characters blended in the incest role play. Very nice touch.

I like where this is going, and cannot wait to read how Cindi impregnates Kristen.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
Breathtaking.

I've been waiting for this part for a very long time, but it's been worth it. I'm very eager to read chapter 4. Many thanks for this beautiful masterpiece.

LenaptLenaptover 16 years ago
GREAT !

WOW, Mimi, Great Storie -( as always ! )

Love yours Stories Mimi . Please don't stop !

Wet wet kisses

Helena

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Wonderfull fantasy

You got what is all about. Fantasy and creation. Great caracters and magical ambience, congrats. I`m waiting chapter four

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Very good submission

Please don't make the awaiting for the 4th chapter last for too long.

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