All Comments on 'A Proposal Most Indecent 01'

Yet another grade school dropout so doesn't know the commonly used terms for this kind of story. Its stupid to use "come" when it should be "cum" to reference semen/sperm/orgasm; makes for total confusion and indicates how lacking in education the author is.

If you’re going to reference “Menolo Blancs” you should look up how to spell it.

Don't listen to the nay-sayers, your story is very good, one of the much better stories I've read, your characters are believable, and Francine's plight is understandable. Please keep writing, you're very talented.