by stevie3624
That was HOT!!! Well written and paced, the way a story should be. Some guy's have all the luck. Looking forward to reading more of your stories.
Let's keep in that way, please!? That was PATHETIC!!!!
Stick to comic books, loser!
Liked the story a lot and most of your others as well, you've been added to the favs. Keep it up please :D.
And let's keep it that way, too. If "Anonymous in the South" could write then he'd have published something here and would proudly point to it. And if he could properly criticise then he'd have shown specific improvements. He does neither and then calls the Stevie3624 a loser. How sad is that? Stevie3624: just keep doin' whatcher doin'!
The 2 remaining pages were not as strong in my opinion, but, you had me at Hello. Top rating!
Very stimulating. This is just the kind of story most of us come here to read.
God that story made me came so hard...twice! I had to stop after the first half of the story and come back to it later :)
Great story. just what i wanted to read in an incest story, and the ending is right out of my fantasies, too! keep it coming!
It is not easy to stimulate a 48 year old penis easily, you did that! very professionally wrtten. Congrats.
snath1958
I loved the way the story turned around. When it first started your MC was so scathing in his view of his mother. I'll admit I had my fears at the direction it looked like it was going to take. And then everything for the two of them altered so dramatically but so subtly after their second encounter and I held my breath as I watched you strike out on a new path, a pleasantly unexpected one, at least to me. Bravo. Nicely done.
Ah wonderful, what more could I add? This is one of those fantastic mom-son incest stories that have been buried under Lit's pile of (mostly crap) stories, yet I am lucky to have found out this treasure trove.
Mom's pussy felt so good, it gripped my cock perfectly, as I pumped her deeply. My cockhead touching her pussy bottom as our body's came together. Her moans only increased the force of my thrusts. We passionately kiss as we continue to built toward sexual our release. We're both breathing hard, moaning, and I'm not thinking of anything but the task at hand. As I tell my mom I'm about to cum, she starts moaning load, and telling me to fuck her. My cum shooting into her pussy took her over the edge, and I fucked her hard. We were so satisfied at that moment, still breathing hard we began French kissing. After a relatively short time, I was hard again, and back inside the pussy I loved so much.
I thought it was a GREAT story. The way you took it from the start and changed directions was amazing.
All those times of fucking and you couldn't give me one description of the bra or panties? They just came off, what a waste of time
Now this was a MOTHER and SON, who loved
to fuck, anytime, anyplace, on anything. BUT
they also loved, to make love. Well done .
...5*****HOT...
....THANKS....
What's with you fucking idiot writers and your infatuation to bring this retarded anal crap in mother-son incest erotica? Completely and instantly ruined the story.
Pretty good story what with the relationship going from full off to full on. Kind of an accelerated plot line though. And then; you almost fucked it up by bringing in the prospect of pregnancies . . . .