All Comments on 'A Quiet Evening At Home'

I liked how there was no disrespect as there are in a lot of interracial stories. This was just a sweet, romantic story. It was nice.

Very hot story, Rob. Romantic and erotic.

I couldn't help but giggle a bit at the number of times she came, though. They had to have been 10 or more! Is that even possible? You're in danger of making other women jealous.

She's a Pez dispenser of orgasms! *evil grin*

A great read which will be mentioned on the New Story Review Thread... and for Aurora... Yeah... 10 times is VERY possible. :D ~ Red.

Dayum, that's one way to start my morning with a bang! I love the way you weave the love they have for one another into the story. Wonderful!

Obviously you have a gift to write erotic stories but may I suggest that you should not be so heavy on adjectives, etc. Leave a little more for the reader's imagination. This would also shorten story a little. I found after initial love making it all began to sound the same. You are a good writer -but could be a lot better!

Quiet Evening of Erotic Activity made even hotter when written by a Writer quite adept at graphic description and the ability to portray that 'in the moment' feeling.

Good One, Rob!

I think that this was an excellent story. I think that you managed to convey a need for eachother in this story often missing from other erotict works...however, I also agree with the other poster, that slightly fewer adjectives allows the reader to develop a picture in their mind and allows the story to flow slightly better.

Damn I wish I was the lady in the story. Erotic and sexy and all that jazz

There are good smut, ok smut, not so good smut and really bad smut.

In this case it's call excellent smut!

Wonderfully erotic. Very descriptive. Tastefully written. Nothing trashy about it. Excellent writing. This is Class A+ material.

Thank you.

I loved this story...erotic and sexy!

That is how GREAT MIND BLOWING EYE ROLLING sex should be! Im jealous lol :)

I can't believe I haven't commented on this one yet! I've read it and apparetnly got to lost in it to remember my manners....This is a very hot story. I don't know how you do it!! Please...keep doing it!

a little too elaborate. Which made it sound pedantic. Unlike some of your other stories...Mancelt.

Wow!!! I want that!!!