by MrIllusion
I really hope you write another chapter of this amazing story. You have a real talent for writing
A very intoxicating story with nice build up to the climax.
Only a handful of typos.
Please continue
I'm really interested to see where things go from here in the next story.
This story was so good I must have read it at least ten times. I hope you decide to write another chapter soon !
I really enjoyed this story! That being said, I would like to see what the three girls look like after their pregnancies.
Could you tell us when you plan on writing the next chapter of this story?
For those of you wondering if there will be a sequel, I don't think so. The tone and nature of a sequel would be so utterly different from the first part that it would barely make sense. I can't come up with ideas that would make sense beyond just a regular foursome in a spa. While it's not completely uninteresting, it lacks the punch of an original story and it wouldn't add anything to the storyline.
If some of you have ideas, send me an email (don't post it here in the comments).
Wow! Pregnant fetish has never been my thing but your story made me zing! Very well done. Very sexy and Erotic. Kudos MrIllusion. 5*
I too find pregnant women very sexy, their menfolk are just plain dumb missing out on some great sex. Wife was very horny as we 'anointed the babies head'. No need for a sequel, just great as it is.