All Comments on 'A Really Bad Day Ch. 02'

That was awesome ! More please

im so happy you wrote part 2 causee DDDDAAAAAMMMM I LOVED EVERY WORD !

Ok, so they're back, but I'm sure there's still another little chapter in there somewhere i.e. Sarah the ex, the parents etc etc. See, I've started it for you :))

Absolutely beautiful. I've been there in my own ways, and it did warm my heart :)

please continue this story is ssssssoooooooooooooo gggggggggoooooooooooooood maybe bring sarah into the story as a problem

You write beautiful stories I felt as I know them thank you for

Entertaining ur readers

Another chapter (or more) please. A wonderful story

I want to cast my vote AGAINST any more complications. These two have already been through so much, maybe one more chapter to send them off into the sunset together, then let us remember them fondly.

I love this story, so beautiful!!! You've made my Christmas!!! Especially when she shouted "Jesus"! Lol, really that means LOVE :)))

...to wrap things up. Let's get to see their happily ever after that you've hinted at in the endings of the first two parts. HOWEVER... There deos need to be one last speedbump to get over. Jess' parents. I don't believe it should be a big, relationship endangering, diversion though. We need to see her parents throw a fit then have her (and maybe her brother) tell them to stuff it. Just my opinion, but it would round things out, making a nice complete picture.

Loved this one. More please!!

Yes amazing when requests are answered. Knowing how hard is is at times to not just tell any tale but a request from others to enlarge. As if you have this in mind from the beginning. A tale what they want to enjoy and follow. You truly gave what was asked for. Which means you are a great writer or more to the point an author.

Thanks I did not ask but the story felt as alive, as if it was an true expierience. Thanks again Janice

That was absolutely amazing I can't explain how happy I am that you wrote another part!!!! I'm not so secretly hope you'll write another part or two!!! I think it would be a great idea to involve Jesses parents into your next installment if you write one!!! This couple has been over many humps so far but I think Jesses parents would be a hefty one to get over which I believe would make one hell of a great next installment maybe even a make it our break it hump!!! I love reading Family vs. Love stories!! Any ways enough of my ranting my point was that I LOVE your stories!!!! Also PLEASE continue!!!!!! :-)

This was truly amazing! It's probably one of my favourite on this website! Please please pretty please more, it would be so amazing!!!!

You truly are not only a wordsmith;but a talented author. Thanks for writing the second chapter. We all would love to see and hear the story line continuted. Regardless of what you intend to do, I'll read anything you author. I(as we all do who have readthis story) look forward to more soon. It was a great Christmas present.-CP

....for the second instalment. You proved sgain that you are a talented author of love stories, with some exiting sex written with complete understanding of 2 lovers making love. I know you think it is disappointing, that is the only thing you got wrong: your audience thinks it is typical Cat, who never disappoints. Kellie.

I really loved this story,both parts have a warmth and love that make them a joy to read, and the sex is hot too.. would really love a 3rd part.. libby

I really love this whole story and would love to read about dealing with Jess's parents. However, I understand that it can be hard to write if you didn't already have the story in mind. I thank you for this second installment, and would love to read a third. No matter what, I love your stories and would love for you to keep writing.

Is it just too selfish to ask for another chapter? You have created characters that your readers love and we all want to read more about them!

Thanks Livecat, great story once again xx

Yeah, I agree with the earlier comment we are a selfish bunch.It is rare that we get a story that is really exciting and that doesn't just leave you hanging never to be finished.It could end here but what fun would that be....Luv Ya!

Please keep writing on this plot, we are practically begging for more :)

Astonishingly compulsive reading; so sensitive, so kind, generous and loving; just the way most of us all wish every person should be.

Having read both parts of this story, the only word I can think of to describe it is spectacular. I loved the characters and their interactions and the romance, even though sudden, felt real. who hasn't felt that singular rush of passion for someone in their life? It's intoxicating and you do a fantastic job of drawing your readers in so they can experience it vicariously through the protagonists.

And now, for my single moment of being kind of an asshat. At one point in the story a character (Chris I believe) speaks about "pressurizing" their partner into something. It should just be "pressuring", unless of course they're talking about filling the other with compressed gas or fluid like an aerosol can or zeppelin, in which case pressurizing would be appropriate.

Sorry to be a jerk. Other than that tiny quibble, I found the tale enjoyable and erotic. Please keep writing.

I agree, one of the best stories I've ever read. The story wasn't jus based on sex, but something more. He chemistry between two people who have troubles of their own. What a fabulous story! I'd beg for another chapter, ppllleeeaaasssee!!

Thanks for sharing such a beautiful story. You have me hooked and I'm going to read the rest of your stories.

Kisses xxx

As someone without a creative bone in their body I can't imagine what goes into creating a story like this, and I think we're very selfish to ask you to create on demand.

That being said, another chapter in their lives would be greatly welcomed!

AWESOME! This story deals with real everyday issues like: Misunderstandings, Insecurities, Fear and the best part, Making-up! You can feel empathy for these two hotties, as i'm positive we have all found ourselves sometime or another, in a similar situation. This chapter is Hotness indeed!!!

**I LOVED IT!**

Please, if you can, give us more!

(Greedy little devils, aren't we?)

For you to be able to write such a beautiful story. That must be emotionally draining. Because at one point you had me in tears.

This isn't the selfish comment I started to write. At first I was only thinking of something I could write that might inspire you, influence you or encourage you to write another chapter or two. Just like all your other readers and fans. But I wasn't going to stop with just pleading and begging. Until I read that you were in England, sex wasn't off the table. Will I hope this made you smile. And thank you for writing such a wonderful story, I loved it....

Gay Kat.

Well, the second chapter was just as good as I hoped it would be. Totally satisfying, totally believable. As it turned out, a really good day!

Your admiring fellow-countryperson.

I thought Ch 1 was one of the best stories I've ever read, Ch 2 brings everything in perspective. I want to feel that out there somewhere, there is really a Jess and Chris, maybe not their true names, but two people who love each other as no one else could.

Your talent for words is impeccable. I made you my favorite and intend on reading all your stories. Again, thank you for sharing with all of us.

Lisa

You need to keep this story line going! Excellent storyline and well written. Chris needs to meet Jessica's parents and move forward with their relationship. Please continue!

I feel like I got myself all excited, was at the point of an amazing orgasm, and then stopped cold turkey.... Kinda like this story, if you don't continue with it!!

i could easily read a 500 page book with these characters. great storyline with some sex thrown in . i would classify it as romance complete .the best novella i have read in a long time . please continue with more chapters

This story is very touching and deserves an epilogue! Your story in chapter one as wonderful and as commented on by others chapter two was pure enjoyment. I look forward to chapter three! Thank you for posting such a wonderful piece. A welcome change from the single page Wam - Bam - Thank you- Mam!

Lovely writting again. Great work please continue, can't wait for chapter 3. My favorite story so far. You doing good.

I hope you write another chapter where the meeting of the parents is involved.

Thanks Cat, a great story, and as with so many leaves the reader wishing to have heard more of the tale of the girls.

Hope you are well and that the muse might find expression again. Many thanks for sharing your work.

Another great story from a master story teller! Please keep writing!

One of the best stories ive read.....

It had 'depth' and 'heart'

Loved it.

And I've read it multiple times, and it just gets better with each reading! Thank you for sharing it wit us!

Quite lovely; perhaps time for another chapter in what was likely not the smoothest of journeys for two very forthright and passionate women? Your recent work on "The Private Life of a Country Vet" and "Crossing a Line" shows you are at the top of your game...

Who wouldn't want more of this.

Great characters, and still in its formative stage.

Truly beautiful story. thank you so much for it. xoxox

A beautiful story, but one that had me choked up and in tears. When a story can provoke such emotion in me, I know it's a powerful story. I wish there were more.

I've had a fantasy of that coming true for me.

Fuck Jess.

Allow me to expand: Chris shouldn’t have had to be the one who went running back. Jess kicked her out for no reason. Then felt bad about that and didn’t answer her texts or emails? Which only made matters worse. What kinda backward ass logic is that. Jess was right. She didn’t deserve Chris. If they were gonna get back together the least Jess could’ve done was grovel a little. Come on, Chris. Have some self-respect. At least make Jess work for it. “Oh you’re sorry for throwing me out on the street like literal garbage and then ignoring me? Ok.” *cue sexy times* I know this seems harsh because she was “confused and depressed,” but news flash. Everyone has their issues. I’ve had hard times too. But did I emotionally abuse someone I love who loves me back? No. That’s not a normal response. Nor one that should just be forgiven with the little to no effort Jess put in.

Again, fuck Jess.

I digress.

P.S. This isn’t a critique about the writing or the author. I’ve read many of your stories and LOVE your writing and your characters.

A beautiful, romantic story. (And no, Jess shouldn't have to beg - sometimes we need those who love and accept us enough to get past our faults and failings without having to debase ourseleves further.)

Great story! It's a shame that you did not continue it. There was so much potential material there to expound on. I felt that it ended much too soon...

What word of joy could describe this story ...... Fabulous lovely enchanting hearttaking hearttouching soul filling wonderful and much more ......... This is soooooo precious and extraordinary written ....... Thank you

Thanks when you add things like the deafness your stories are even better. Loved this one.

I loved the way Chris won Jess's heart by taking care of her, even after Jess went a little bit off the rails. I found that heartwarming and lovely. Thanks for another great story.

Fiction is always tricky. Does adding deafness add to the story? Is it too manipulative of the reader by purposely choosing a heartstring idea? Will I make it come off classy? Or will it be cheesy?

I fight issues like these in every story.

You did very well in these two.

WOW!!!! I'll admit I love love stories... This is truly one of the best!!! When I finished the whole story, I went back and read it again!

I absolutely loved the second part of this story. I didn't realise you'd done a second chapter & that was a pleasant surprise to discover that.

Thanks again ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Thanks for this sweet story!

A really nice story! These characters are lovely!

Thank you!

Please write chapter 3!

A very nice story,

Thank you for sharing,

What a really beautiful story 😍 The way you developed ghe characters coupled with a really good story line made it what it is. On the base of ghis story alone, I'm going to add you to my favourites. Looking forward to reading more of your stories!!!

Not sure how long ago its been since you wrote this, but I love both storys. I loved beem and have enjoyed your other work. Please tell me you'll write part three!

Hey! Don't stop there! Come on we need part 3! How do Jess's parents react? Will there be wedding bells? Is Chris going to learn to sign?

This is fantastic writing. Thank you so much.