All Comments on 'A Red Bikini'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
good work

Nicely done! Keep up the great writing, friend!

MacroeyeMacroeyeabout 20 years ago
thumbs up!!

keep going, read more & write more and I'll guranttee your english will improve... keep it up...

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
EVERY MAN'S DESIRE

THANKS HAD ME GOING THE VERY FIRST PAGE. TOTAL EXPLOSITION

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Mmm

well written, enjoyed the build up! good job, keep it up

gogreengogreenabout 13 years ago
lovly story

great well crafted and keep them coming.

5 stars and big thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Spellcheckitis

Throes of orgasm/pleasure, vice "throws"

Thrashing vice trashing

Otherwise, great story. Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Very erotic

I couldn't keep my hand off my hard cock while reading this lusty tale. Keep on writing.

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