by petertowers
Love the story, but yes you need an editor.
Nice and relaxed. And yes, you REALLY need an editor.
What a great story.
I do hope there is more in the future.
Rapier
my God, this series never got stale, predictable, or anything other than amazing. best series on Literotica!
One excellent series.
I do hope there's more to come.
Good story wish I was young and able to what he did such is life ant and can't.but was intertwining.