by ao1701e
Idk was liking the series, but MC doesn't seem to fit with swinging. Wanting to do something nice for Nat, I get that, but...the getting another dude to fuck her doesn't seem right. Also seems especially weird for him to MC her about the proposal.
Way to ruin the story by backpedal. You literally had Karen and Ben state that they didn't like the idea of another guy. SO WHY DID YOU ADD THAT 3 CHAPTERS LATER?! I'm all for supporting an authors creative direction. But you don't declare something and change the story down the road to something that isn't fitting. 0/10 maybe get a proofreader to stop you from going cucksville on your next story
I want to hang in with you. This story is getting pretty violent and abusive. That ain't love.