All Comments on 'A Ring Named Ezzie Pt. 13'

by ao1701e

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Totally excellent chapter. The sex scenes are wonderful and romantic at times. I couldn’t have been as generous with the rapists. Although Ben was correct regarding the mental and emotional pain they will feel but you need to add physical pain to the mix so they can feel helpless just like their victims. That’s a much better mental and emotional pain but hey, we’re just conversing here. 😉

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Very good, the rape was handled sensitively, and I like how you left all of that in Karen's hands.

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