All Comments on 'A Room with a View'

More?? Good start. Hope there's more chapters.

@mbh129 I wasn't planning on any more chapters- but maybe I'd consider it if it's something that people would like to read :)

Yes, more please.

Nice and very open-ended. You could do a lot with this story with a sequel series, It would heat up a lot it seems. Good writing style makes it for me. Thank you.

Great appetizer story... I hope it leads to multiple appetites being appeased, course by course, and eventually a full buffet.

Definately needs a follow up. Like the writing style and this could go in any direction. Kate could see a lot of activity through her telescope. More couples making love. Men alone pleasuring themselves. Two leabians. A man being dominated by a woman. A girl pleasuring herself with an incredibly large vibrator and other toys. The view from Kate's telescope could be endless!!!

Hi, here from the Summer Lovin’ event. You did a very nice job with the set-up, making the reader feel for Kate and hope that things would improve for her. It looks like she got the kickstart she needed at the end, and I can easily see this being continued as others have suggested. 4.5*, rounded up to 5. And good luck in the contest!

Gave this 4 stars because it was well told.

It had the potential to be a much hotter story though ;->

I love your writing style. Please make them a bit longer. 3500 words or more. You are REALLY talented. I cannot wait to read more of your work.