All Comments on 'A Royal Sacrifice Ch. 11'

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Anonymousover 16 years ago

whoho first comment!

Warm nights and sweet romance in a far away kingdom. Who needs anything else?

Maharat

slyc_willie over 16 years ago

Getting to the heart of the story

It's getting pretty hot at the castle ;) Nice to see Evie get a little attention, Red. Well done.

MrsDeathlynx over 16 years ago

Still giggling

Great set up for everyone involved, Evie might get happiness, Muriel might get happiness...Now we just gotta find old Bags a woman and it will be happily ever after completely all around, hehe.

Darkniciad over 16 years ago

Delightful

I love the way your chapters pull everything together, and the heat was certainly up there in this one. Everyone seems to be moving toward a happily ever after, but Bagdemagus doesn't seem to happy about that. That may very well bode ill for some. Just the right amount of heat, intrigue, sensuality, character development, and story advancement on all fronts. A perfect chapter. Well done Red!

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