All Comments on 'A Rude Awakening Ch. 01'

I hope this turns into a Romance story were the uncle does not win because it seems the Grandfather actually left it all to her without the restrictions everybody thinks it has.

$80 Million in his hands would be a nightmare.

A very intriguing story, and hot as hell

must be in partnership in the "dirty deed", and ,maybe, even Mark's wife. How are you going to rescue the heroine and bring all of this tale to happy fruition? Episode 2, quickly, please!!!

It's a mystery and a very entertaining one at that. Hope you get the next part submitted soon! I have guesses about which way this is going, and can't wait to read the rest.

Thanks!

Looking forward to more.

Finally an erotic story with a nice plot; can't wait to read the sequel.

There are too many errors for me to get too into this story. I like all the sex, forced and consensual, and I like the plot, but the grammar is just horrible. You should really use an editor or 3 before submitting your work.

Great story with a dark side to the ploy unfolding. Please - do write the next part, and soon! Great story, cant wait to see the next twists. And for those who seek perfection - the grammar is fine. This is an amateur site, you want everthing perfect? Go buy a published book!

The story kept me interested. Is the neighbor really just a pawn? Looking forward to another chapter!

like the story, waiting for more

I need to know how this ends. What a wonderful build up and plot development. Need to know the ending.

I'm waiting for the next part of this story! I like it alot.

I liked the first chapter and can't wait for the next one.

WHY U NO KEEP GOING? D:}

More chapter(s) coming soon ? I hope so.

What the heck? You can't leave it like that! How about having someone else pick it up as a cooperative effort? This is just cruel.