by Daniellekitten
I am so glad to see that you are back and writing again!! Keep the chapters coming and I can't wait to read your new stuff!!! :)
One can see what's happening both for the killer and the team of detectives. But there is no wrap up. You've left us, your readers, hanging for the conclusion. I trust there will be an ending.
This is a very good story. The characters are well formed and belivable. Please keep writing.
Just curious, because this is the second story of yours that I've read, both reposts, that doesn't have an ending. It's like you only post the first half. Both were good stories, so it's frustrating to not be able to finish them.
Can you please post the ending to this and the Alpha squad one, it is really frustrating to not be able to read a full story
The complete story is on another site, it runs to 37 chapters.
If you are interested where to find the rest of this you can email me at RedSilkCamisole@aol.com. to find out where you can rread the end. If was trying to edit the story and return it better than it was before. Thanks so much!
Daniellekitten/Wendy Stone
"Her 22 was taken was already out of her ankle holster." Chekhov's Gun... let's see if it's true,
"He walked over to the door, opened the screen and picked up the bag of Chinese that he had dropped. The little white boxes it was packed in had kept it from spilling."
Oh thank Goodness, I was worried...
I dropped a 1-gallon jug of wine on the front porch about 15 years ago, fumbling for my keys. I still mourn it.